3 page essay - Business Management

Review the email to Bobby Johnson found below

·         Write a three to four (3-4) page paper that answers the following:

·         Identify the communication problems with the email.  

·         Using the 10 Cs for Writing Effectively, rewrite the email.  
Include: content, completeness, correctness, clarity, coherence, conciseness, connection, creativity, courtesy, and closure. 

·         Identify which Cs you used where and how that changed the email in terms of the effectiveness.

·         Identify the strategies used for composing a more effective message.

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The format of the paper is to be as follows:

·         Typed, double-spaced, Times New Roman font (size 12), one-inch margins on all sides, APA format in a Microsoft Word document.

·         Use headers for each of the subjects being covered, followed by your response.

·         In addition to the three to four (3-4) pages required, a title page is to be included. The title page is to contain the title of the assignment, your name, the instructor’s name, the course title, and the date.

TO: Bobby Johnson

SUBJECT: Retirement Party

Hello Everyone. As you know Joe Banyon is retiring next month. I’ve been asked by some friends to arrange a little farewell party in his honor.

The date is Friday, 6PM at City Café, and we hope you can make it.

We would like to give him a gift certificate. We are asking everyone to contribute. Let me know ASAP.

See you there.

Bobby