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BUS 345

Make the sentences more concise (to avoid wordiness). 2 pts. each

1. A great number of people feel that people who work for the government need to be able to communicate with the public in a more effective way.

2. In the last few weeks, some new employees have been hired by the company.

3. It is possible that we will have another meeting to talk about the matter of bonuses at the end of the year.

4. Basically, management conducted interviews with our clients and decided that we need to have more training regarding customer service.

5. Due to a request made by the client, we are not permitted to send these emails to anyone who works outside of the company.

6. It is the opinion of the team that we are capable of handling the task.

7. We are looking for people that have compassion to become volunteers each and every Thursday night.

8. We feel we should have been told by management about the new policy regarding work from home.

9. In order to answer your question, it is necessary for me to research this topic further.

10. In the event of the fire alarm going off, it is important that you leave the building immediately