Essay correction

I need help with my English class essay 

I need some one very good in english 

and understand what the teacher is asking for 

I need it done by 5 hours 

it need as soon as possible 

i have send the quetion  the essay 

I hope u understand everything 

also I want to add up in the essay 

that I have experience the same thing of the writer when I was in high school I was not allowed no make or juwury and i had to wear long socks and I had to cover up to same as the writer