Discussion reply.

As you provide feedback to your classmates, you should respond to the following:

•   Is the paragraph clearly written? Does it flow well according to the given-new contract?
•   Are there any sentences that do not follow the given-new contract? If so, which ones?
•   Do you have any suggestions for revisions that would make the paragraph stronger? If so, what are they? 

Here is my third paragraph from my process essay about the proper procedure for wound care.  The main goal in wound care is to make sure as nurses that the patient in this case a geriatric patient does not get a infection from improper wound care:

The next step in our procedure is to remove the old dressing from the patient and perform a wound check on the area that we are about to take care of.  If the area has any major changes that are not positive, we must inform the RN who will then check the wound and inform the doctor of the change.  If the area looks to be about the same or better, we continue on with our wound dressing procedures.  After removing the old dressing and discarding of it properly, we must wash our hands and put on the clean sterile gloves in order to continue.