birds rewrite

I think you need to give you reader a bit more information here.  You don't even mention the poet or the titles of any poems, for instance.  It's quite hard to follow what you mean. 

Ideas are good but some of them are not understandable, also each one needs separate to one paragraph with quotes' support. No need any resources from other places.

even it's on a different topic, how the essay should be looks like is in the example doc. hope that help