Please fix my paper !

BabyFace

 

 Please fix my draft by following these steps :  do not change the introduction and my thesis just I need you to add 1 source for my 2ed point ( criteria ) and 2 sources for the 3rd point ( criteria ) and then write a conclusion for the paper. PLEASE DON'T CHANGE THE WHOLE PAPER  .. DO NOT DELETE MY WORDS ,  and when you add sources please DO NOT PARAPHRASE , just use the author words including quotation marks,  just do what I asked for. 

 

Finally , follow all the instructions from the attach files.

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