develop my paper

 this is my professor comments on my paper.

(For example, you discussed "teamwork" in your paper. A good way to relate this to our text would be to refer back to Chapter 7 and bring in the stages of team development: forming, storming, norming, performing and adjourning.  Or, you could concentrate more on the issue of diversity from Chapter 2, and explain how understanding and valuing diversity ultimately helped the Titans to be a winning team.) follow the instruction please.

my paper is on the attachment.