I want to edit my reflection paper Titans

Hi,

i did a reflection paper about the movie " Remember The Titans " but my profossor want me to make it longer and edit some mistakes, i wrote about 3 pages and i want about 4 or 4 and half pages. 

i will upload a picutre about what she want to edit.

the profosore told me " example, you discussed "teamwork" in your paper. A good way to relate this to our text would be to refer back to Chapter 7 and bring in the stages of team development: forming, storming, norming, performing and adjourning.  Or, you could concentrate more on the issue of diversity from Chapter 2, and explain how understanding and valuing diversity ultimately helped the Titans to be a winning team. 

As the paper stands, it is a 6.8/10. It's totally up to you if you would like to redo it or not. "

this is what she want.

i need it as soon as you can finiah it