Capstone report (need help)

I wrote the report and need help for some problems (attached the report)

1.The essay should be Capstone REPORT (systemic review) not proposal.

2. There are grammarical mistakes, structure, and some comments show in the paper (atteched 2 -- "capstone report with comments") need to fix.

3. You can make any change but need to keep MORE than 5000 words.  

4. Attached 1-- "information" is all the requirements and needs that should be in the report.