2nd Rough Draft

I wrote a first rough draft about an evaluation paper about a film, as you know the evaluation should be based on criterias. but I wrote the essay like a review for the film. you see attached the essay. the film is The Avangers : Age of Ultron.

my criterias are:

1- gets all super heroes in one "real" movie, than comics. "third paragraph"

2- Good for all-ages. "fourth and fifth paragraph"

3- more than one genre in one movie."sixth paragraph"

my instructor gave me these feedback on each paragraph.

first paragraph: Can you introduce your criteria here?

body paragraphs: Lots of good details about the movie. could you turn these into exaples of criteria?