English Comp II Research Paper

COMMENTS

1st blue mark-repeat title here

2nd blue mark-more substance needed

3rd blue mark-comma needed, review for grammatical errors

4th blue mark-good transition

COMMENTS

1st blue mark-good use of in text citations to support assertions

2nd blue mark-more substance needed. Effective paragraph is 5-7 sentences

3rd blue mark-no space between paragraphs(an overlook by me)

4th blue mark-direct quotes,citation error