Persuasive Sales Letter

1. Prewriting and Organizing the Persuasive Sales Letter

First Paragraph  Brainstorm and Write: a mini-story and/or facts or statistics that will get your reader's attention. I donate regularly to the ASPCA and the letters I receive from them always get my attention. (A fund raising letter, by the way, is essentially a sales letter.) The ASPCA usually starts letters by telling me a story about an abused animal. I'll never forget the story of Astro the dog, who lived tied to a post on a three foot piece of chain. The paragraph began with the story and then concluded with a sentence that told me if I donated to the ASPCA, I could prevent dogs like Astro from being abused. I had my checkbook out fast! Think about your reader! Think about what will get your reader's attention. This letter is not about you and what you can do or what you have done. It's about what your product or service can do for the reader. Keep that at the forefront as you compose your letter.

Second Paragraph Brainstorm and Write: specific details about your product or service. Describe the product or service. Use all five senses--sight, hearing, smell, touch, taste. Think about size, Think about dimension. Phrase the details using "you-attitude." Focus on what the reader will receive.

Third Paragraph Brainstorm and Write: reader benefits. Specifically, focus on how and in what ways the reader will benefit by using your product or service. Remember effective reader benefits are tangible and specific. In this paragraph, use a bullets to make the benefits stand out for your reader.

Fourth Paragraph Brainstorm and Write: a few sentences that ask for what you want the reader to do and when you want the reader to do the action. Do you want the reader to order on your website by a certain date for example? Perhaps you want to offer the reader a discount if he or she orders by a certain date. Be specific when you ask for what you want. Tone is important.

Note: Throughout the letter, keep a professional tone and avoid phrases such as "Act Now!" or "Don't Delay!" This letter isn't a late-night infomercial; it's a business letter to a prospective customer.

Brainstorm: ideas for your product or service. Take five minutes and list all the products and/or services that come to you. You can be creative, but keep with proper decorum, and within the law (smile). In the past, students have written about shoes that always fit and never hurt, underwear that never rides up, hair and beauty products that offer numerous benefits, auto repair and detailing services, catering and personal chef services, dog and cat grooming and sitting services, cleaning services, repair services, and so on.

Please make your product or service original. You can sell make up for example, but not specific brands that are already on the market. You can persuade customers to use your auto repair shop, but make sure it's your shop, not a Midas franchise. After you finish brainstorming, choose the product or service that interests you the most. Brainstorm an appealing name. Perhaps you can even think of a slogan!

2. Below is the sample format for the assignment and tips for completing the Sales letter.

Company Name Address City, State Zip Phone Number

March 7, 2015 (use the date you will turn in the letter)

Chris Thomas (create the name of a person, title, company name and address) Director of Marketing  Adco Corporation 1987 Carillion Parkway Suite 104 Dayton, OH 45444

Dear Chris Thomas: (use the full name if you don t know the gender of the person. If it s to a woman, use Ms., NOT Mrs. or Miss)

Gain attention, arouse reader interest. Do this by telling a short anecdote or mini-story. Another effective technique states provocative facts and/or statistics. One If you wanted to sell home security systems, for example, you could begin the letter with a sentence that gives statistics on breaking and entering incidents in the reader's neighborhood. If you wanted to sell a cleaning service, you could tell an anecdote that might begin with "Imagine coming home to a sparkling clean house." You can also combine stories and statistics. Conclude your paragraph by telling the reader what, exactly, you want to sell. Remember to use "you-attitude." Avoid phrases like "I have come up with great idea," or "I have researched for years," and so forth. Focus on what the reader will received. (Make this paragraph 5-7 lines.)

Develop your assertions about your product or service. Describe the product or service in detail. If you're selling a cleaning service, state exactly WHAT gets cleaned. State HOW, WHERE, and WHEN. If you're selling a product, give colors, sizes, dimensions and so forth. (Make this paragraph 5-7 lines.)

Explain the benefits of your product and service. Remember, these are benefits to the reader. Use a bulleted or numbered list to make your points stand out. Make sure you have at least two sentences and then begin your bulleted list. Be sure the items listed are parallel; that is, begin each bullet with the same kind of word with the same structure. (This paragraph should be at least 5-7 lines. Count each bullet or number as a line, so you need at least two sentences above and three bullets above to make five lines.)

· Explain why customer needs the product.

· Explain what product offers.

· Use a bulleted or numbered list or some kind of graphical highlighting to make your points stand out.

Notice on the above bulleted list, each item begins with a verb that is in present tense. Make sure your bullets are also parallel. You don't have to begin with verbs, but do make sure each bullet begins with the same kind of word.

Make your readers act. This is where you state WHEN and WHAT the reader should do. Offer specific dates and times; tell them how they can contact you. (This paragraph should be 2-3 lines.)

Sincerely, (4 spaces under the Sincerely, enough space to hand write your name.)

Dim Carcrashian (type your name)

3. The correct use of these criteria will determine your grade on your final letter:

· The letter is organized correctly:

1. The first paragraph gets the reader's attention by telling a mini-story and/or offering facts and statistics. The product or service is stated at the end of the first paragraph. The paragraph is 5-7 lines in length.

2. The second paragraph discusses the product or service in detail. It is 5-7 lines in length.

3. The third paragraph provides specific reader benefits and provides a bulleted list of reader benefits; the bulleted items are parallel. The paragraph is 5-7 lines in length with a minimum of 3 bullets and 2 sentences/lines of text.

4. The fourth paragraph asks the reader specifically for an action. A specific time period is stated. It is 2-3 lines in length.