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Outline Name: I.

II.

III.

IV.

A.

1.

2.

a.

b.

B.

1.

2.

V.

VI.

VII.

Main Claims/Points (I., II., III.)

1. Mickey Mouse appeals to all types of people,

presents a more positive side of rodents and

represents American innovation. (Use twice)

2. Mickey Mouse appeals to all types of people.

3. Everyone remembers the first Mickey Mouse

movie that they saw. We should help future

generations remember the Steamboat Willy by

making him our national cartoon.

4. Mickey Mouse should be the official cartoon

of America. (Use twice)

5. Growing up as a kid we all watched cartoons,

many of them Disney cartoons.

Sub-claims/points (A., B.)

6. He often makes mistakes.

7. He has big ears.

Support (1., 2.)

8. His ears make him relatable to all those who

were made fun of in their early years.

9. “68% of Americans have larger than average

ears” (Donald Duck 2)

10. In “Fantasia,” Mickey Mouse makes a HUGE

mistake.

11. These times of actions reflect those of younger

children.

Sub-support: (a., b.)

12. 59% of those who make mistakes use magical

means. (Disney 23)

13. 89% of children, under the age of 18, make

mistakes with the best of intentions. (Disney

22)