Rough Draft of Final Project – Proposal

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Teachers response to WEEK 1 ASSINGMENT

This is an excellent subject to address, but your proposal needs more clarity and research.

Then refocus your audience analysis. You present a basic overview, but detail the background of the stakeholders involved, what they value, and how you are going to convince them of your argument.

(Yes, ethically, your project makes sense, but you must make it agreeable to the bottom line, also.)

( 0.08 / 0.13) Written Communication: APA Formatting

Below Expectations - Fails to exhibit basic knowledge of APA formatting. There are frequent errors, making the layout difficult to distinguish as APA.

( 0.32 / 0.50) Provides a Timeline for the Completion of Each Task for the Proposal and for the Entire Final Project

Below Expectations - Attempts to provide a timeline for completion of each task for the proposal and the entire Final Project; however, most, if not all, of the deadlines are unclear, and significant details are missing.

( 0.32 / 0.50) Experience

Below Expectations - Attempts to include student's credentials or future goals in relation to the subject matter; however, significant details are missing and unclear.

THESE ISSUES MUST BE FIXED FOR THIS ASSIGNMENT AND THE FINAL PROJECT