Adding Structure and Transitions

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Main Points for Paraphrasing

Leslie Williamson

Walden University

19 June 2017

Main Points for Paraphrasing GWII

Having two instructors when running an online course is important because the student has access, to extra support according to. One of the instructors can be grading papers as the other one is engaging students in the weekly discussion and making plans for activities of the following week. Wilson and Linder VanBerschot (2014) One gets the perceptaion that they are being involved in an online course on there is a high frequency of interaction, responsiveness and other fors of noverbal communitcation.The tome which is taken also determines the sense of involvement in a particular course. Comment by Beth L. Schoborg Klinkhammer: This period goes after the citation, which should be in parenthses—your second paraphrase in the next paragraph is correct. Comment by Beth L. Schoborg Klinkhammer: I’m not sure what this sentence means—could you clarify?

One of the most important aspects of an online course are the noverbal cuse as well as the tone. They are essential for group econferencing,simultaneous sessions, and recorded feedback. Despite the planning prework that is done, it is ultimately important to modify the lessons for individual classroom needs, discussions and papers will require monitoring and feedback. The presence of more than one instructor helps to fix this issue (Wilson & Linder VanBerschot, 2014).

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Reference

Wilson,B. G., & Linder VanBerschot,J. (2014). Co-teaching an online action research class. Comment by Beth L. Schoborg Klinkhammer: APA: Single space entry, add spaces before first name initials spellcheck journal title, add page numbers if they’re available

CanadianmJournl of Learning and Technology, 40(2). Retrieved from

http://www.cjlt.ca/index.php/cjlt

Leslie,

This is a really good start. I see only two of the three paraphrases the assignment asks for, however. At least, there are only two citations, which would indicate that there are only two paraphrases. There are quite a few errors with APA, which I’ve noted, and I would encourage you to read each sentence individually to make sure each makes sense and is communicating a clear message. Some of the jumbled language here might be because you were working to put things in your own words as you paraphrased, but you still want to make sure your reader can understand each sentence. I’m looking forward to seeing the revisions next week!

Best,

Beth