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Reading  for  Question  1     Yelp  review  of  the  restaurant  Brigantessa  by  customer  “James  G.,”  posted  on  2/26/15  

“2  stars”  

Just  a  quick  update:  Having  received  several  (obnoxious)  private  messages  from  the  owner,   Francis  Cratil  Cretarola,  apparently,  if  you  don't  like  the  food  at  Brigantessa,  the  problem  is  you   and  your  ignorance.  

Quite  a  way  to  run  a  business.  

Uneven.  

At  the  start,  I  have  to  say  the  Jamón  ibérico  was  indeed,  the  finest  ham  on  earth  and  well  worth   the  $20  price  tag.  That  being  said:  

Service:  Good,  not  great,  a  little  on  the  slow  side,  not  enough  to  reduce  the  overall  grade.  

Atmosphere:  A  nice  couple  of  rooms,  not  over  crowded,  nicely  appointed.  

Food:  Beet  Salad  and  Pheasant  tureen  were  pleasant.  Not,  in  and  of  themselves  a  reason  to   visit,  but  decent.  

Pizza:  I  knew  in  advance  this  was  a  Neapolitan  pizza  and  was  ready  for  it.  It  would  be   completely  unfair  to  compare  this  to  American  pizza,  and  I  would  never  do  that.  However,  the   pie  was  relentlessly  bland.  Essentially  a  middling  quality  dough,  lightly  baked,  and  sparsely   topped  with  an  excruciatingly  flavorless  tomato  sauce  and  flavorless  ricotta.  I'd  compare  it  to   Wonder  Bread  with  ketchup  and  some  Kraft  Parmesan  sprinkled  (sparingly)  on  top.  This  is  not  a   good  interpretation  of  Neapolitan  pizza,  at  least  the  way  it  was  executed  this  evening.  

Admittedly,  it  was  restaurant  week,  but  we  arrived  quite  early  and  didn't  order  off  the   restaurant  week  menu.  

Long  and  short,  there  are  simply  too  many  other  very  good  Italian  restaurants  on  Passyunk   (Virtu,  Birra,  Paradissio,  etc.)  to  spend  an  evening  and  $150  at  Brigantessa.  Life  is  short,  don't   settle  for  average.  

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Brigantessa  owner  response,  posted  to  Yelp  on  2/27/15  

James  G,  this  is  Francis  Cratil  Cretarola,  one  of  the  owners  of  Brigantessa.  I'd  like  to  quickly   address  some  of  your  comments.  

There  is  no  "sauce"  on  real  pizza  napoletana.  By  Neapolitan  regulations,  which  we  follow  to  the   letter,  tomatoes  must  be  raw  and  from  the  slopes  of  Vesuvius.  We  use  DOP  San  Marzano  or  the   even  rare  DOP  piennolo  variety,  which  grow  closer  to  the  sea  and  have  more  salinity.  

Any  ricotta  you  consumed  was  imported  from  Italy  (though  its  inclusion  in  your  description   confuses  me).  

The  "middling  dough"  was  made  with  flour  milled  in  Napoli  and  did,  indeed,  get  a  "light"  baking.   By  Neapolitan  regulations,  it  must  be  cooked  in  a  wood-­‐fired  900+  degree  oven  for  60  to  90   seconds.  No  more,  no  less.  We  don't  do  the  crackery  crusts  you  obviously  prefer.  We  do  pizza   napoletana,  which  must  be  "umida  e  soffice,"  moist  and  soft.  It's  not  for  everyone.  

I  admit  to  being  confused  about  just  what  pizza  you  had.  The  Calabrese  has  ricotta,  but  its   accompanying  ingredients  are  calabrese  chili  oil,  roasted  peppers  and  sausage.  The  Margherita   has  raw  San  Marzano  tomatoes,  fior  di  latte  mozzarella  and  basil,  but  no  ricotta.  The  Regina  is   dressed  with  Piennolo  tomatoes  (or  San  Marzano,  depending  on  their  availability),  mozzarella   di  bufala  from  Caserta,  Campania  and  basil  (no  ricotta).  The  Marinara  has  San  Marzano   tomatoes,  garlic,  oregano  and  extra  virgin  olive  oil  (it  has  no  cheese  of  any  kind).  The  Sorrentina   has  yellow  piennolo  tomatoes  and  Meyer  lemons.  No  ricotta  however.  The  other  pies  include   components  (lamb  sausage,  potato  croquettes,  pancetta  ...  )  you  fail  to  mention.  So,  which  pie   did  you  have?  

We  follow  the  rules  as  we're  applying  for  Neapolitan  certification  from  the  AVPN,  a  body  in   Napoli  that  determines  the  standards  for  pizza  napoletana.  We  would  be  the  first  pizzeria  in   Philly  to  receive  certification.  

If  you  prefer  pizzas  with  "sauce"  that  are  more  crackery,  the  world  is  your  oyster.  We  don't   disparage  such  pizzas;  they  were  the  pizzas  we  grew  up  with.  We  are  doing  something  different,   rooted  in  tradition,  that  it  seems  you  actually  weren't  "ready  for."  I  happily  post  this  video   we've  made  explaining  the  traditions  we  follow:  youtube.com/watch?v=kXLH….  It's  fun,  so   please  watch  it  ...  it's  not  "excruciating."  

We  support  and  take  pride  in  the  work  of  all  of  our  neighbors  (including  the  establishments  you   name  ...  they  all  have  their  virtues),  please  do  encourage  others  to  visit  them.  East  Passyunk  is  a   community.  

Reading  for  Question  2   Below  is  former  Temple  University  President  Neil  Theobald’s  letter  to  the  Pennsylvania  State   Legislature  requesting  funding  for  the  2016-­‐17  school  year.  Public  universities  such  as  Temple   get  state  funding  annually,  and  while  Temple’s  funding  (like  all  state  universities  in   Pennsylvania)  has  been  decreasing  in  recent  years,  Theobald  is  asking  for  a  21.63%  ($33  million)   increase  over  2015-­‐16  funding.  

 

Introduction  

  I  am  greatly  honored  to  bring  you  Temple  University’s  annual  request.  This  is  my  third   year  submitting  a  request  as  Temple’s  President.  Each  year  I  do  so,  I  am  deeply  humbled  by  the   thoughtful  and  enthusiastic  response  I  receive  from  state  leaders,  especially  for  initiatives   designed  to  keep  Temple  affordable  and  accessible.  The  partnership  between  Temple  and  the   Commonwealth  of  Pennsylvania  is  a  long  and  proud  one  that  has  generated  tremendous   benefits  for  Commonwealth  residents.  I  look  forward  to  strengthening  and  sustaining  that   relationship  in  the  years  to  come.  

  I  am  pleased  to  share  with  you  the  impact  Temple  has  on  the  Commonwealth.  In  the   discussion  that  follows,  I  will  describe  how  Temple  creates  value  for  the  Commonwealth   through  our  unprecedented  efforts  to  provide  a  high-­‐quality  education  to  Commonwealth   residents;  create  life-­‐changing  research;  and  remain  affordable  and  accessible  while   maintaining  our  excellence.  

  I  would  be  remiss  if  I  did  not  note  that  Temple  is  surging  in  quality.  Our  new  class  of   freshmen  and  transfer  students  is  the  largest  and  most  academically  qualified  class  we’ve  ever  

had.  Their  average  high  school  GPA  of  3.51  is  the  best  of  any  incoming  class  in  Temple  history.   They  also  represent  a  20  percent  rise  in  African-­‐American  freshmen  and  26  percent  rise  in   Latino  freshmen,  adding  to  the  more  than  45  percent  of  all  Temple  students  who  identify   themselves  as  non-­‐white.  

  Most  importantly,  the  new  students  come  from  throughout  the  Commonwealth;  we   now  have  registered  students  from  63  Pennsylvania  counties.  Temple  reflects  this  state—   talented  and  diverse.  We  are  able  to  educate  so  many  high-­‐achieving  Commonwealth  students   in  part  because  we  have  increased  financial  aid  to  ensure  talented  students  of  all  backgrounds   have  access  to  our  high-­‐quality  education.  At  the  same  time,  we  have  had  three  consecutive   years  of  record  fundraising,  and  we  recently  moved  into  the  top  100  of  the  National  Science   Foundation’s  research  expenditure  rankings.  

  Given  our  value  to  the  Commonwealth,  it  is  not  surprising  that  Temple  rose  six  spots   this  year  to  achieve  its  highest-­‐ever  ranking  in  U.S.  News  &  World  Report’s  Best  Colleges—  No.   115  among  national  universities.  Our  rise  was  a  sign  of  our  incredible  momentum:  Over  the   past  five  years,  Temple  has  ascended  an  unprecedented  17  spots  in  the  U.S.  News  rankings,   making  us  the  No.  1  gainer  in  the  Commonwealth  over  that  time.    

Alumni  who  power  Pennsylvania  

  The  impact  our  university  has  on  the  Commonwealth  is  immense.  Go  into  virtually  any   boardroom,  newsroom,  classroom,  rehearsal  room  or  operating  room  in  the  Commonwealth  of   Pennsylvania,  and  you  are  likely  to  find  a  Temple  graduate.  

  Temple  is  the  number  one  provider  of  professional  practitioners  in  Pennsylvania,   including  graduates  of  our  medical  school,  dental  school  and  law  school.  More  than  80  percent   of  our  students  come  from  the  Commonwealth.  Just  as  important:  those  who  come  from  out  of   state  elect  to  stay  and  work  here  after  they  receive  their  degrees.  There  are  more  than  167,000   Temple  alumni  living  in  Pennsylvania—equivalent  to  the  Commonwealth’s  third-­‐largest  city.  

  Because  of  Temple,  the  Commonwealth  has  an  influx  of  talented,  highly  qualified   college  graduates  entering  the  work  force  every  year.  Numerous  state  elected  officials  are   Temple  graduates.  With  your  continued  support,  we  will  be  able  to  keep  producing  the  future   leaders  of  this  state.  

  Temple’s  benefit  to  Pennsylvania  is  clear.  Temple  supports  71,000  jobs  in  the   Commonwealth.  Every  $1  the  Commonwealth  appropriates  for  Temple  generates  $43  in  state   impact.    

Fly  in  4  

  Since  I  arrived  at  Temple,  I  have  been  emphasizing  the  crucial  importance  of  graduating   in  four  years  to  reduce  student  debt.  Today,  I  am  proud  to  report  that  Temple  has  made  major   strides  in  this  area.  

  This  year,  about  93  percent  of  our  freshmen  signed  up  for  Fly  in  4,  Temple’s  innovative   plan  to  help  them  graduate  on  time  and  limit  their  debt.  To  briefly  review,  here's  how  Fly  in  4   works:  students  agree  to  meet  with  their  advisors  regularly  and  take  classes  when  they’re   offered.  They  commit  to  sticking  to  their  academic  plan  and  graduating  on  time.  

  For  its  part,  Temple  has  invested  heavily  in  advising.  We’ve  also  ensured  that  courses   are  taught  when  students  need  them.  If  students  meet  all  of  their  requirements  under  Fly  in  4   but  still  can’t  graduate  on  time,  Temple  will  pick  up  their  remaining  tuition  bill.  

  This  year’s  incredible  93  percent  participation  rate  in  Fly  in  4  follows  last  year’s   impressive  rate  of  88  percent.  These  students  are  making  a  commitment  that  will  limit  their   loan  debt  and  put  them  on  the  path  to  success  in  their  careers  and  lives.  

  As  I  have  discussed  with  many  of  you  in  the  last  year,  we  want  our  students  to  graduate   in  four  years  because  taking  longer  delays  their  entry  into  the  higher-­‐paid,  college-­‐educated   segment  of  the  work  force.  It  also  adds  significantly  to  their  debt:  Students  who  stay  in  college   for  more  than  four  years  often  have  to  take  out  riskier  loans  or—even  worse—use  their  credit   cards  to  pay  for  college  expenses.  

  In  recent  years,  Temple  has  made  tremendous  progress  in  raising  our  four-­‐year   graduation  rate.  With  Fly  in  4,  we  expect  that  rate  to  rise  even  higher.  Fly  in  4  also  positions  us   as  an  innovative  leader  for  other  institutions  in  the  Commonwealth  and  the  nation  to  follow.    

Research  that  improves  lives  

  Temple’s  research  is  focused  on  real-­‐world  results.  For  example,  our  researchers  helped   lead  an  international  study  that  found  that  providing  HIV  patients  with  drug  therapy   immediately  after  they’re  diagnosed  significantly  lowers  their  risk  of  developing  AIDS.  That   discovery  follows  the  pioneering  announcement  last  year  that  our  researchers  successfully   eliminated  the  HIV  virus  from  cultured  human  cells—an  incredible  first  step  on  the  path   toward  a  permanent  cure  for  AIDS.  

  At  Temple,  we  produce  research  that  changes  peoples’  lives.  The  breakthroughs  and   technologies  we  produce  in  labs  are  being  transferred  to  the  marketplace  faster  than  ever   before.  And  our  research  is  especially  beneficial  right  here  in  the  Commonwealth.  

  Just  recently,  a  study  supported  by  Temple’s  Center  on  Regional  Politics  found  that   closing  Pennsylvania’s  student  achievement  gaps  could  generate  billions  of  dollars  in  state   impact.  Our  researchers  are  also  working  on  projects  to  improve  language  development  among   impoverished  youth;  reverse  the  effects  of  heart  failure;  and  develop  new  treatments  for   chronic  obstructive  pulmonary  disease  (COPD).  

  Temple’s  research  has  been  helped  tremendously  by  our  new  Science  Education  and   Research  Center  (SERC),  which  opened  last  fall.  This  state-­‐of-­‐the-­‐art  facility  allows  faculty,   researchers  and  students  to  collaborate  across  disciplines  and  meld  learning  in  the  classroom   with  discoveries  in  the  lab.  

  SERC  was  funded  in  part  by  generous  support  from  the  Commonwealth.  I  cannot  begin   to  express  how  grateful  I  am  for  the  Commonwealth’s  investment  in  our  research  enterprise.  

We  look  forward  to  providing  a  return  on  that  investment  by  producing  even  more   transformative  research  for  Commonwealth  residents.  SERC—and  all  of  the  life-­‐  changing   research  produced  at  Temple—perfectly  demonstrates  the  impact  that  is  possible  when  the   Commonwealth  partners  with  Temple  University.    

The  Temple  Option  

  Farid  Abdelrahman  is  a  Temple  freshman  who  plans  to  become  a  neurosurgeon  and   open  up  hospitals.  He  attended  public  school  in  Philadelphia,  graduated  high  school  with  a  3.88   GPA  and  participated  in  a  variety  of  extracurricular  activities.  But  he  did  not  do  as  well  on  his   SATs  as  he  had  hoped.  

  Students  like  Farid  are  why  we  created  the  Temple  Option,  an  alternative  admissions   path  for  students  who  show  great  potential  but  don’t  perform  well  on  standardized  tests.   With  the  Temple  Option,  students  can  apply  to  Temple  without  submitting  a  standardized  test   score,  such  as  the  SAT  or  ACT.  Students  who  do  perform  well  on  standardized  tests  are   encouraged  to  choose  the  traditional  route  and  supply  their  scores.  

  The  Temple  Option  is  our  response  to  the  growing  body  of  research  evidence  that  shows   high-­‐school  GPA,  class  rank  and  “noncognitive”  factors  are  more  reliable  predictors  of  college   success.  If  students  choose  not  to  submit  test  scores,  they  must  answer  specially  designed,   self-­‐reflective  short-­‐answer  questions.  When  evaluated  by  trained  readers,  the  answers  to   these  questions  provide  evidence  of  noncognitive  motivational  and  developmental  traits  that   are  better  predictors  of  future  success  than  are  standardized  test  scores.  

  Temple  was  the  first  state-­‐related  school  in  Pennsylvania  to  offer  such  an  admissions   path  for  talented  students.  But  we  are  hardly  alone.  Hundreds  of  other  colleges  and  universities   have  moved  to  test-­‐optional  admissions  in  recent  years,  including  George  Washington   University,  Wake  Forest  University,  Brandeis  University,  Kansas  State  University  and  the   University  of  Arizona.  

  We  want  our  students  to  know  that  at  Temple,  they  are  more  than  a  test  score.  This   year,  about  18  percent  of  our  freshmen  enrolled  at  Temple  via  the  Temple  Option.  They   included  students  like  Farid,  who  can  go  on  to  change  the  world—thanks  to  this  new   admissions  path.    

An  affordable,  high-­‐value  institution  

  In  this  era  of  great  change  in  higher  education,  Temple  stands  for  accessibility,   maximum  affordability  and  excellence  of  many  kinds—all  at  once.  Many  colleges  see  those   factors  as  a  choice;  they  pick  just  one  to  emphasize.  We  see  them  as  inseparable.  That  is  the   unique  Temple  value  proposition.  

  Because  of  our  commitment  to  creating  value  for  the  Commonwealth,  we  have  kept   base  tuition  increases  to  an  average  of  2.4  percent  over  three  years.  That  is  an  unprecedented   effort  at  tuition  control  that  is  unlikely  to  be  found  at  many  other  schools—  public  or  private— in  the  Commonwealth  or  the  nation.  

  We  have  also  taken  several  other  steps  to  help  our  students.  This  year,  we  increased   financial  aid  by  $6  million,  raising  the  total  amount  of  available  financial  aid  to  more  than  $100   million.  

  But  we  are  not  resting  on  our  laurels.  Recently,  Temple  engaged  Gallup,  Inc.,  the   well-­‐known  polling  company,  to  conduct  a  survey  that  will  help  us  learn  more  about  how  our   alumni  are  doing  post-­‐college.  This  survey  will  provide  invaluable  data  on  the  value  we  create  in   our  students’  lives  and  how  we  can  continue  to  benefit  students  for  years  to  come.    

Conclusion  

  At  Temple,  our  mission  is  clear.  We  are  committed  to  transforming  lives  through  our   research;  growing  the  Commonwealth’s  economy;  and  providing  talented  and  motivated   students  of  all  backgrounds  with  access  to  a  high-­‐quality  college  degree.  Because  of  our  unique   value  proposition,  it  should  be  clear  that  Temple  generates  value  for  the  Commonwealth  at  an   effective  cost.  

  I  am  proud  to  be  the  leader  of  one  of  Pennsylvania’s  great  urban  research  institutions.  If   there  is  anything  I  can  do  to  help  you  learn  more  about  Temple  University,  please  do  not   hesitate  to  contact  me  at  [email protected].  

  Thank  you  for  your  consideration,  

Neil  D.  Theobald  

President  

Reading  for  Question  3   U.S.  News  ranking  categories,  subfactors,  and  weights    

Category   Subfactors   U.S.  News   weighting  (%)  

Peer  assessment  survey  Undergraduate  academic   reputation   High  school  counselor’s  rating  

22.5  

Acceptance  rate   High  school  standing  in  top  10%  

Student  selectivity   Critical  reading  and  math  portions  of  the  SAT  

and  the  composite  ACT  score  

12.5  

Faculty  compensation   Percent  faculty  with  top  terminal  degree  

Percent  faculty  that  is  full-­‐time   Student/faculty  ratio   Class  size  under  20  

Faculty  resources  

Class  size  over  50  

20.0  

Average  graduation  rate  Graduation  and  retention   rate   Average  freshman  retention  rate  

22.5  

Financial  resources   Financial  resources  per  student   10.0   Alumni  giving   Average  alumni  giving  rate   5.0   Graduation  rate   performance  

Graduation  rate  performance   7.5  

 

How  U.S.  News  Calculated  the  2016  Best   Colleges  Rankings   Here's  a  breakdown  of  the  key  college  data  that  go  into  the   annual  rankings.   Sept.  8,  2015    

By  Robert  Morse,  Eric  Brooks  and  Matt  Mason  

The  host  of  intangibles  that  makes  up  the  college  experience  can't  be  measured  by  a  series  of   data  points.  But  for  families  concerned  with  finding  the  best  academic  value  for  their  money,   the  U.S.  News  Best  Colleges  rankings  provide  an  excellent  starting  point  for  the  search.  

They  allow  you  to  compare  at  a  glance  the  relative  quality  of  institutions.  

The  measures,  their  weights  in  the  ranking  formula  and  an  explanation  of  each  follow.    

Undergraduate  academic  reputation  (22.5  percent):  The  U.S.  News  ranking  formula  gives   significant  weight  to  the  opinions  of  those  in  a  position  to  judge  a  school's  undergraduate   academic  excellence.  The  academic  peer  assessment  survey  allows  top  academics  –  presidents,   provosts  and  deans  of  admissions  –  to  account  for  intangibles  at  peer  institutions,  such  as   faculty  dedication  to  teaching.    

To  get  another  set  of  important  opinions  on  National  Universities  and  National  Liberal  Arts   Colleges,  we  also  surveyed  2,200  counselors  at  public  high  schools,  each  of  which  was  a  gold,   silver  or  bronze  medal  winner  in  a  recent  edition  of  the  U.S.  News  Best  High  Schools  rankings,   as  well  as  400  college  counselors  at  the  largest  independent  schools.  The  counselors  represent   nearly  every  state  and  the  District  of  Columbia.    

Each  academic  and  counselor  surveyed  was  asked  to  rate  schools'  academic  programs  on  a   scale  from  1  (marginal)  to  5  (distinguished).  Those  who  didn't  know  enough  about  a  school  to   evaluate  it  fairly  were  asked  to  mark  "don't  know."    

The  score  used  in  the  rankings  is  the  average  score  of  those  who  rated  the  school  on  the  5-­‐ point  scale;  "don't  knows"  are  not  counted  as  part  of  the  average.  In  order  to  reduce  the  impact   of  strategic  voting  by  respondents,  we  eliminated  the  two  highest  and  two  lowest  scores  each   school  received  before  calculating  the  average  score.    

The  academic  peer  assessment  score  in  this  year's  rankings  is  based  on  the  results  from  surveys   in  spring  2014  and  spring  2015.  Previously,  only  the  most  recent  year's  results  were  used.    

The  results  from  the  three  most  recent  years  of  counselor  surveys,  from  spring  2013,  spring   2014  and  spring  2015,  were  averaged  to  compute  the  high  school  counselor  reputation  score.   This  was  done  to  increase  the  number  of  ratings  each  college  received  from  the  high  school   counselors  and  to  reduce  the  year-­‐to-­‐year  volatility  in  the  average  counselor  score.  

Ipsos  Public  Affairs  collected  the  data  in  spring  2015.  Of  the  4,530  academics  who  were  sent   questionnaires,  40  percent  responded.  This  response  rate  is  down  very  slightly  from  the  42   percent  response  rate  to  the  surveys  conducted  in  spring  2014  and  spring  2013.  The  counselors'   one-­‐year  response  rate  was  7  percent  for  the  spring  2015  surveys.    

Retention  (22.5  percent):  The  higher  the  proportion  of  first-­‐year  students  who  return  to   campus  for  sophomore  year  and  eventually  graduate,  the  better  a  school  is  apt  to  be  at  offering   the  classes  and  services  that  students  need  to  succeed.    

This  measure  has  two  components:  six-­‐year  graduation  rate  (80  percent  of  the  retention  score)   and  first-­‐year  retention  rate  (20  percent).  The  graduation  rate  indicates  the  average  proportion   of  a  graduating  class  earning  a  degree  in  six  years  or  less;  we  consider  first-­‐year  student  classes   that  started  from  fall  2005  through  fall  2008.  First-­‐year  retention  indicates  the  average   proportion  of  first-­‐year  students  who  entered  the  school  in  the  fall  of  2010   through  the  fall  of  2013  and  returned  the  following  fall.  

Faculty  resources  (20  percent):  Research  shows  that  the  more  satisfied  students  are  about   their  contact  with  professors,  the  more  they  will  learn  and  the  more  likely  they  are  to  graduate.   We  use  six  factors  from  the  2014-­‐2015  academic  year  to  assess  a  school's  commitment  to   instruction.  

Class  size  has  two  components:  the  proportion  of  classes  with  fewer  than  20  students  (30   percent  of  the  faculty  resources  score)  and  the  proportion  with  50  or  more  students  (10   percent  of  the  score).    

Faculty  salary  (35  percent)  is  the  average  faculty  pay,  plus  benefits,  during  the  2013-­‐2014  and   2014-­‐2015  academic  years,  adjusted  for  regional  differences  in  the  cost  of  living  using  indexes   from  the  consulting  firm  Runzheimer  International.  We  also  weigh  the  proportion  of  professors   with  the  highest  degree  in  their  fields  (15  percent),  the  student-­‐faculty  ratio  (5  percent)  and  the   proportion  of  faculty  who  are  full  time  (5  percent).    

Student  selectivity  (12.5  percent):  A  school's  academic  atmosphere  is  determined  in  part  by   the  abilities  and  ambitions  of  the  students.    

This  measure  has  three  components.  We  factor  in  the  admissions  test  scores  for  all  enrollees   who  took  the  critical  reading  and  math  portions  of  the  SAT  and  the  composite  ACT  score  (65   percent  of  the  selectivity  score).  We  also  consider  the  proportion  of  enrolled  first-­‐year  students   at  National  Universities  and  National  Liberal  Arts  Colleges  who  graduated  in  the  top  10  percent   of  their  high  school  classes  or  the  proportion  of  enrolled  first-­‐year  students  at  Regional   Universities  and  Regional  Colleges  who  graduated  in  the  top  quarter  of  their  classes  (25   percent).  The  third  component  is  the  acceptance  rate,  or  the  ratio  of  students  admitted  to   applicants  (10  percent).    

The  data  are  all  for  the  fall  2014  entering  class.  While  the  ranking  calculation  takes  account  of   both  the  SAT  and  ACT  scores  of  all  entering  students,  the  ranking  tables  on  usnews.com  display   the  score  range  for  whichever  test  was  taken  by  most  students.  

We  use  footnotes  on  usnews.com  to  indicate  schools  that  did  not  report  to  U.S.  News  the  fall   2014  SAT  and  ACT  scores  for  all  first-­‐time,  first-­‐year,  degree-­‐seeking  students  for  whom  the   schools  had  data.  Schools  sometimes  fail  to  report  SAT  and  ACT  scores  for  students  in  these   specific  categories:  athletes,  international  students,  minority  students,  legacies,  those  admitted   by  special  arrangement  and  those  who  started  in  the  summer  of  2014.  We  also  use  footnotes   to  indicate  schools  that  declined  to  tell  U.S.  News  whether  all  students  with  SAT  and  ACT  test   scores  were  represented.      

For  schools  that  did  not  report  all  scores  or  that  declined  to  say  whether  all  scores  were   reported,  we  reduced  the  value  of  their  SAT  and  ACT  scores  in  the  Best  Colleges  ranking  model.   This  practice  is  not  new;  since  the  1997  rankings,  we  have  discounted  the  value  of  such  schools'   reported  scores  in  the  ranking  model,  because  the  effect  of  leaving  students  out  could  be  that   lower  scores  are  omitted.  If  a  school  told  U.S.  News  that  it  included  all  students  with  scores   in  its  reported  SAT  and  ACT  scores,  then  those  scores  were  counted  fully  in  the  rankings  and   were  not  footnoted.  

If  less  than  75  percent  of  the  fall  2014  entering  class  submitted  SAT  and  ACT  scores,  their  test   scores  were  discounted  in  the  ranking  calculations.  This  policy  was  also  used  in  the  2015  edition   of  the  rankings.  

Financial  resources  (10  percent):  Generous  per-­‐student  spending  indicates  that  a  college  can   offer  a  wide  variety  of  programs  and  services.  U.S.  News  measures  financial  resources  by  using  

the  average  spending  per  student  on  instruction,  research,  student  services  and  related   educational  expenditures  in  the  2013  and  2014  fiscal  years.  Spending  on  sports,  dorms  and   hospitals  doesn't  count.    

Graduation  rate  performance  (7.5  percent):  This  indicator  of  added  value  compares  expected   graduation  rates  with  actual  ones.    It  shows  the  effect  of  the  college's  programs  and  policies  on   the  graduation  rate  of  students  after  controlling  for  spending  and  student  characteristics,  such   as  test  scores  and  the  proportion  receiving  Pell  Grants.  We  measure  the  difference  between  a   school's  six-­‐year  graduation  rate  for  the  class  that  entered  in  2008  and  the  rate  we  predicted   for  the  class.  

If  the  school's  actual  graduation  rate  for  the  2008  entering  class  is  higher  than  the  rate  U.S.   News  predicted  for  that  same  class,  then  the  college  is  enhancing  achievement,  or   overperforming.  If  a  school's  actual  graduation  rate  is  lower  than  the  U.S.  News  prediction,  then   it  is  underperforming.  

Alumni  giving  rate  (5  percent):  This  reflects  the  average  percentage  of  living  alumni  with   bachelor's  degrees  who  gave  to  their  school  during  2012-­‐2013  and  2013-­‐2014,  which  is  an   indirect  measure  of  student  satisfaction.  

To  arrive  at  a  school's  rank,  we  first  calculated  the  weighted  sum  of  its  standardized  scores.  The   final  scores  were  rescaled  so  that  the  top  school  in  each  category  received  a  value  of  100,  and   the  other  schools'  weighted  scores  were  calculated  as  a  proportion  of  that  top  score.  Final   scores  were  rounded  to  the  nearest  whole  number  and  ranked  in  descending  order.  

 

Readings  for  Question  4   Memo  from  Yahoo  CEO  Carol  Bartz  on  Dec.  14,  2010:  

Yahoos,  

I  want  to  share  some  tough  news  with  you.  Today,  we  began  notifying  some  Yahoos  that  they   will  lose  their  jobs.  Most  of  the  reductions  will  come  from  the  Products  org  and,  when   completed,  will  affect  about  4%  of  the  company.  

I  know  this  has  been  rumored  for  some  time.  It’s  disappointing  when  things  like  this  leak,  and  it   certainly  doesn’t  make  it  any  easier  for  anyone  involved.  This  was  a  tough  call,  but  a  necessary   one.  We  need  to  make  these  changes  now  to  ensure  that  Products  is  structured  and  running   the  way  we  want  as  2011  begins.  And  that  means  we  need  fewer  Yahoos  in  some  areas,  and   different  types  of  Yahoos  in  others.  

There  are  several  reasons  for  this.  First,  we’ve  found  a  lot  of  duplication  in  work  between   Products  and  the  regions.  Second,  it’s  no  secret  that  we’re  cutting  investment  in   underperforming  and  non-­‐core  products  so  we  can  focus  on  our  strengths  (like  email,  the   homepage,  search,  mobile,  advertising,  content  and  more).  And  lastly,  we  need  to  get  the   Products  cost-­‐structure  in  order  so  it  aligns  with  our  development  plans  for  next  year  and   beyond.  

You’ve  heard  me  say  before  that  I  didn’t  come  to  cut  Yahoo!  to  greatness.  That’s  still  true.  This   decision  is  about  more  than  cost  savings.  The  changes  are  meant  to  get  us  into  a  position  so  we   can  invest  more  in  the  kind  of  products  and  technology  we  know  we  need  to  be  successful.  The   process  that  begins  today  –  along  with  Blake’s  past  org  changes  and  new  Products  operational   plan  –  helps  to  get  us  there.  

It’s  never  easy  to  say  goodbye  to  Yahoos  we  know  and  work  with,  especially  before  the   holidays.  Please  know  that  we’re  helping  those  affected  with  severance  pay  and  benefits,  plus   services  to  help  them  find  other  jobs.  

One  last  thing  before  I  go:  It’s  important  to  put  this  in  perspective,  and  remember  that  we’re   making  good  progress  on  our  turnaround.  Margins  have  expanded.  Revenue  growth  has   stabilized  after  a  long  period  of  decelerating  trends.  Product  rollouts  are  accelerating  as  we   modernize  our  infrastructure.  Our  Search  alliance  with  Microsoft  continues  on  schedule,  and   more.  

We’ve  got  a  lot  of  potential,  but  there  is  still  a  lot  of  work  to  be  done.  Let’s  stay  focused  and  not   lose  sight  of  that.  

Carol  

  _____________________________________________________________________________      

Warner  Bros.  CEO  Kevin  Tsujihara’s  memo  to  staff  in  September  2014

There  is  no  easy  way  to  deliver  today’s  message.  As  you  know,  we  at  Warner  Bros.  have   committed  to  reducing  costs  across  the  company  in  order  to  meet  our  long-­‐term  financial   targets,  and  that  includes  cutting  staff.  These  changes  are  challenging,  but  we  believe  they  will   allow  us  to  reallocate  resources  and  position  the  company  for  growth  and  stability  in  the  years   ahead.  

We’ve  now  completed  much  of  our  company-­‐wide  review,  and  most  business  groups  will  be   announcing  staff  changes  this  week,  beginning  today.  However,  some  groups,  including   Finance,  MIS  and  Technical  Operations,  have  been  engaged  in  more  complex  reorganizations;   they  will  make  some  staff  changes  now,  with  most  coming  in  the  first  quarter  of  next  year.   Similarly,  international  territories  will  proceed  according  to  local  policies  and  protocol,  and   most  of  their  changes  will  be  announced  in  the  early  part  of  next  year.  

I  know  that  every  employee  around  the  world  is  a  part  of  Warner  Bros.’  success,  and  it’s   difficult  to  lose  colleagues  who  have  helped  make  the  Studio  the  global  industry  leader  it  is   today.  As  always,  we  are  committed  to  taking  care  of  our  employees,  and  we  will  be  as   generous  as  possible  with  those  who  are  impacted  by  these  cuts.  

These  are  difficult  decisions,  and  we  don’t  take  them  lightly.  We  examined  every  aspect  of  our   businesses  to  ensure  that  we  were  restructuring  in  a  way  that  would  allow  us  to  minimize  the   impact  on  our  employees,  while  continuing  to  adapt  to  the  changing  global  marketplace.  With   your  continued  help  and  support,  I  am  confident  that  Warner  Bros.  will  remain  the  best  studio   in  the  world,  while  preserving  the  culture  that  has  made  this  company  so  special.

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EA  executive  chairperson  Larry  Probst,  April  2013  

As  we  begin  the  new  fiscal  year,  I  want  to  provide  you  with  a  brief  update  on  some  important   changes  to  our  organization.  As  Executive  Chairman,  my  focus  is  to  ensure  EA  is  delivering  high   quality  games  and  services  to  our  consumers,  while  helping  the  executive  team  develop  a  FY14   operating  plan  that  drives  growth,  rationalizes  headcount  and  controls  costs.  

In  recent  weeks,  the  executive  team  has  been  tasked  with  evaluating  every  area  of  our  business   to  establish  a  clear  set  of  priorities,  and  a  more  efficient  organizational  structure.  This  process   has  led  to  some  difficult  decisions  about  the  number  of  people  and  locations  needed  to  achieve   our  goals.  

The  workforce  reductions  which  we  communicated  in  the  last  two  weeks  represent  the   majority  of  our  planned  personnel  actions.  We  are  extremely  grateful  for  the  contributions   made  by  each  of  these  individuals  –  they  will  be  missed  by  their  colleagues  and  friends  at  EA.  

We  are  also  taking  action  to  streamline  our  organization,  including  changes  in  two  key  areas:   • Core  marketing  functions  have  been  consolidated  under  our  COO,  Peter  Moore.  The  

combined  group  will  bring  together  our  Label  marketing  teams,  Global  Acquisition   Marketing  and  Marketing  Analytics  into  one  multi-­‐talented  team  under  Todd  Sitrin’s  

leadership.  The  development  and  marketing  teams  will  continue  to  work  as  cohesive   units,  driving  clear  and  consistent  messaging  and  consumer  engagement  for  each  of  our   franchises.  

• Origin  will  move  into  Frank  Gibeau’s  Labels  organization.  Andrew  Wilson  will  take  on  the   leadership  of  Origin,  working  with  CJ  Prober  and  the  team  to  create  more  value  and  an   enhanced  entertainment  experience  for  our  consumers.  

Change  is  sometimes  difficult,  but  essential.  The  adjustments  we  are  making  will  put  us  in  the   best  position  to  build  great  games  and  services,  deliver  them  more  efficiently  to  consumers,   and  demonstrate  to  players  around  the  world  why  they  should  spend  their  time  with  us.  

EA  is  a  great  company,  with  talented  and  hard-­‐working  teams,  a  strong  portfolio  of  products   and  an  extremely  bright  future.  

Thank  you  all  for  your  dedication  and  commitment  to  our  long  term  success!  

 

Reading  for  Question  5  

The  New  Cheating  Economy  

The  Chronicle  of  Higher  Education    

By  Brad  Wolverton   August  28,  2016      

Fifteen  credits  were  all  he  needed.  That’s  what  the  school  district  in  California  where  Adam   Sambrano  works  as  a  career-­‐guidance  specialist  required  for  a  bump  in  pay.  But  when  he  saw   the  syllabus  for  a  graduate  course  he’d  enrolled  in  last  year  at  Arizona  State  University,  he  knew   he  was  in  trouble.  

Among  the  assignments  was  a  19-­‐page  paper,  longer  than  anything  he’d  ever  written.  The  idea   of  that  much  research  worried  Mr.  Sambrano,  who  also  spends  time  serving  in  the  Army   National  Guard.  

Before  the  class  started,  he  went  on  Craigslist  and  enlisted  the  service  of  a  professional  cheater.   For  $1,000  —  less  than  the  monthly  housing  allowance  he  was  receiving  through  the  GI  Bill,  he   says  —  Mr.  Sambrano  hired  a  stranger  to  take  his  entire  course.  

He  transferred  $500  upfront,  "From  Adam  for  ASU,"  according  to  a  receipt  obtained  by  The   Chronicle.  Then  he  just  waited  for  the  cheater  to  do  his  work.  

On  any  given  day,  thousands  of  students  go  online  seeking  academic  relief.  They  are  first-­‐years   and  transfers  overwhelmed  by  the  curriculum,  international  students  with  poor  English  skills,   lazy  undergrads  with  easy  access  to  a  credit  card.  They  are  nurses,  teachers,  and  government   workers  too  busy  to  pursue  the  advanced  degrees  they’ve  decided  they  need.  

The  Chronicle  spoke  with  people  who  run  cheating  companies  and  those  who  do  the  cheating.   The  demand  has  been  around  for  decades.  But  the  industry  is  in  rapid  transition.  

Just  as  higher  education  is  changing,  embracing  a  revolution  in  online  learning,  the  cheating   business  is  transforming  as  well,  finding  new  and  more  insidious  ways  to  undermine  academic   integrity.  

A  decade  ago,  cheating  consisted  largely  of  students’  buying  papers  off  the  internet.  That’s  still   where  much  of  the  money  is.  But  in  recent  years,  a  new  underground  economy  has  emerged,   offering  any  academic  service  a  student  could  want.  Now  it’s  not  just  a  paper  or  one-­‐off   assignment.  It’s  the  quiz  next  week,  the  assignment  after  that,  the  answers  served  up  on  the   final.  Increasingly,  it’s  the  whole  class.  And  if  students  are  paying  someone  to  take  one  course,   what’s  stopping  them  from  buying  their  entire  degree?  

The  whole-­‐class  market  is  maturing  fast.  More  than  a  dozen  websites  now  specialize  in  taking   entire  online  courses,  including  BoostMyGrade.com,  OnlineClassHelp.com,  and  

TakeYourClass.com.  One  of  them,  NoNeedtoStudy.com,  advertises  that  it  has  completed   courses  for  more  than  11,000  students  at  such  colleges  as  Duke,  Michigan  State,  even  Harvard.  

As  cheating  companies  expand  their  reach,  colleges  have  little  incentive  to  slow  their  growth.   There’s  no  money  in  catching  the  cheaters.  But  there’s  a  lot  of  money  in  upping  enrollment.  

Two  professors  at  Western  Carolina  University  were  so  concerned  about  the  encroachment  of   cheating  that  they  set  up  a  fake  online  class  to  learn  more  about  the  industry’s  tactics,  and  see   what  they  could  detect.  

About  a  dozen  students  agreed  to  enroll  in  the  introductory  psychology  course,  including  John   Baley,  then  a  graduate  student  in  clinical  psychology.  They  were  provided  with  fake  names,   email  addresses,  and  ID  numbers,  plus  a  pot  of  money  for  cheating  services.  Half  were  asked  to   cheat,  and  they  did  so  in  a  variety  of  ways,  collaborating  inappropriately  with  classmates,   buying  papers,  and  paying  others  to  take  tests.  

Mr.  Baley  went  looking  for  a  company  to  take  the  whole  class  for  him.  He  typed  a  few  words   into  his  browser  —  "cheat  for  me  in  my  online  class"  —  and  turned  up  dozens  of  results.  Many   sites  seemed  untrustworthy:  Their  content  was  misspelled  or  grammatically  incorrect,  or  their   customer-­‐service  reps  had  trouble  with  basic  English.  Some  requested  confidential  banking   information  or  asked  him  to  enter  it  into  a  website  with  no  security  protection.  

But  one  company  impressed  him.  Its  representatives  responded  promptly,  explained  how  their   colleagues  would  complete  the  course,  and  guaranteed  a  B  or  better  —  or  his  money  back.  He   agreed  to  pay  the  company  $900,  half  upfront,  and  handed  over  his  course  username  and   password.  

Over  the  next  10  weeks,  the  company,  which  Mr.  Baley  declined  to  name,  to  protect  any   further  research,  passed  him  from  the  customer-­‐service  staff  to  the  management  team  to  the   person  who  took  his  course.  At  each  stage,  he  says,  he  dealt  with  people  who  were  efficient,   responsive,  and  reliable.  In  fact,  the  cheaters  performed  better  than  he  thought  they  would.   They  completed  every  assignment  without  prompting,  at  one  point  providing  a  written  script   for  a  video  presentation  with  less  than  36  hours’  notice.  

The  instructors,  Alvin  Malesky,  an  associate  professor  of  psychology,  and  Robert  Crow,  an   assistant  professor  of  educational  research,  used  Turnitin  and  Google  to  check  students’  work   for  plagiarism  and  monitored  them  to  see  if  groups  were  taking  exams  at  the  same  time.  

The  professors  caught  several  students  plagiarizing  material.  But  they  didn’t  spot  the  paid  test   takers,  purchased  papers,  or  coordinated  assignments.  And  they  had  no  clue  that  a  person  in   New  York  to  whom  Mr.  Baley  had  mailed  his  books  was  behind  the  A’s  they  were  giving.  

Even  when  professors  knew  that  students  were  cheating,  and  were  trying  to  catch  them,  they   came  up  short.  

Mr.  Baley’s  only  frustration  was  with  the  barrage  of  marketing  he  got.  His  Facebook  and   Instagram  feeds  were  saturated  with  ads  for  cheating  companies,  he  says.  That  didn’t  let  up  for   months.  

Two  years  after  the  company  took  his  class,  its  representatives  are  still  trying  to  enlist  him  to   refer  other  students  as  clients.  

Like  any  underground  industry,  academic  cheating  has  its  share  of  sloppy  opportunists  and   savvy  operators.  Most  work  in  the  shadows.  Click  on  a  website  that  offers  academic  work  for   hire,  and  you’ll  probably  find  little  information  about  the  people  or  company  behind  it.  The   owners  often  use  aliases  and  mislead  prospective  customers  with  fake  addresses  and   exaggerated  claims.  

No  Need  to  Study  LLC  lists  its  corporate  address  as  19  East  52nd  Street,  in  New  York,,  but   complaints  filed  with  the  Better  Business  Bureau  say  that  address  does  not  exist.  A   representative  for  the  company  said  in  an  email  that  it  is  a  virtual  business  offering  services   exclusively  online  and  does  not  have  an  office  open  to  the  public.  A  dissertation-­‐writing  service   that  claims  to  be  based  in  Chicago  seems  to  operate  out  of  Pakistan.  "In  order  to  create  a  best   academic  assignment  that  rank  #1  among  other  assignments,"  its  website  says,  "then  you  will   seek  for  a  dedicated  and  experienced  writer’s  help."  

Even  more-­‐established  companies  can  be  difficult  to  track  down.  The  headquarters  of  one,   Student  Network  Resources,  appears  to  be  in  the  middle  of  a  New  Jersey  cornfield.  A  half-­‐mile   away,  in  a  generic  strip  mall,  it  maintains  a  post-­‐office  box  in  a  packing-­‐and-­‐shipping  store.  The   owner  of  the  store  says  he  forwards  the  mail  to  Florida.  It  goes  to  the  company’s  founder  and   president,  Mark  DeGaeta.  

Mr.  DeGaeta  got  the  idea  for  Student  Network  Resources  in  the  late  1990s,  when  he  was  still  in   high  school,  he  says  in  an  email  to  The  Chronicle.  Over  the  years,  he  has  registered  more  than  a   dozen  domains,  including  PaperDue.com  and  HelpMyEssay.com,  which  funnel  work  to  his   company,  whose  name  is  relatively  unknown.  

When  students  place  a  request  through  one  of  the  sites,  they  enter  their  name,  email  address,   and  as  much  information  about  the  assignment  as  possible,  including  due  date  and  level   (undergraduate,  master’s,  or  doctoral).  That  information  goes  into  Student  Network’s  system,   where  a  price  is  set  based  on  the  difficulty  of  the  assignment.  The  job  is  posted  to  a  private   board  for  writers,  stripped  of  any  personal  details  about  the  student.  From  there,  a  willing   writer  picks  up  the  order  and  corresponds  with  the  client  through  a  private  channel  in  which   students  often  disclose  personal  information  about  themselves  and  their  courses.  Then  the   writer  delivers  the  completed  assignment.  

Mr.  DeGaeta  is  mum  about  the  revenue  he  has  brought  in,  but  the  business  appears  to  be   lucrative.  Two  longtime  writers  say  they’ve  earned  as  much  as  $10,000  a  month.  At  peak  times,   the  company  says  on  its  website,  most  of  its  150  writers  earn  more  than  $1,800  a  week.  Writers   typically  pocket  half  the  price  of  an  order;  the  company  gets  the  rest.  If  those  numbers  are   accurate,  annual  revenue  for  Student  Network  Resources  would  be  in  the  millions.  The   company  has  only  two  employees.  

The  founder  has  made  a  good  living,  according  to  public  records.  He  owns  an  apartment  in  a   tony  neighborhood  of  New  York,  near  the  United  Nations  building,  and  seems  to  reside  near   Miami  Beach.  But  his  business  has  fallen  off  in  recent  years,  he  says,  as  the  industry  has   expanded  overseas.  

The  company  emphatically  denies  that  it  is  a  cheating  service.  It  says  it  tells  customers  that  they   may  not  use  its  material  for  academic  credit  —  and  requires  them  to  acknowledge  as  much   before  purchasing  papers,  during  the  research  process,  and  before  receiving  the  work.  "We   vehemently  protect  our  copyright,"  Mr.  DeGaeta  said  in  a  written  statement.  "If  the  customer   decides  to  use  our  material  as  a  reference  they  must  cite  Student  Network  Resources  Inc."  

Several  current  and  former  writers  told  The  Chronicle  that  they  had  believed  that.  Amelia   Albanese,  a  former  community-­‐college  tutor  who  worked  for  the  company  in  2010,  says  she   thought  she  was  writing  sample  papers  for  tutors  and  teachers.  When  she  realized  she  was   doing  students’  work,  she  quit.  

"I  worked  at  a  college,"  she  says,  "and  if  the  students  I  worked  with  had  cheated,  I  would  have   been  furious."  

The  company’s  business  depends  on  covering  its  tracks.  A  memo  it  sent  to  writers  last  year   gives  step-­‐by-­‐step  instructions  for  wiping  the  metadata  from  documents  they  produce.  

"Every  document  that  you  submit  must  have  100%  blank  ‘Summary’  properties,"  the  memo   says.  "You  can  make  the  ‘Author’  field  (and  other  fields)  blank  by  default  for  all  new  documents   by  going  to  ‘Preferences’  -­‐-­‐>  ‘User  Information’  and  replacing  the  content  of  the  ‘First:’  and   ‘Last:’  fields  with  a  blank  space."  

According  to  Mr.  DeGaeta,  the  memo  was  aimed  at  preventing  writers  from  poaching  clients.   But  if  there’s  no  trace  of  a  cheater  on  a  document,  a  college  has  no  way  of  knowing  —  or  if  an   instructor  suspects  something,  no  proof  —  that  the  student  didn’t  do  the  work.  

Cheating  has  become  second  nature  to  many  students.  In  studies,  more  than  two-­‐thirds  of   college  students  say  they’ve  cheated  on  an  assignment.  As  many  as  half  say  they’d  be  willing  to   purchase  one.  To  them,  higher  education  is  just  another  transaction,  less  about  learning  than   about  obtaining  a  credential.  

The  market,  which  includes  hundreds  of  websites  and  apps,  offers  a  slippery  slope  of  options.   Students  looking  for  class  notes  and  sample  tests  can  find  years’  worth  on  Koofers.com,  which   archives  exams  from  dozens  of  colleges.  And  a  growing  number  of  companies,  including  Course   Hero  and  Chegg,  offer  online  tutoring  that  attempts  to  stay  above  the  fray  (one  expert  calls   such  services  a  "gateway  drug").  

Many  students  turn  to  websites  like  Yahoo  Answers  or  Reddit  to  find  solutions  to  homework   problems.  And  every  month,  hundreds  of  students  put  assignments  up  for  bid  on   Freelancer.com  and  Upwork,  where  they  might  get  a  paper  written  for  the  cost  of  a  few  lattes.  

It’s  not  uncommon  for  students  to  disclose  personal  details  in  their  orders,  which  anyone  online   can  see.  This  spring  a  student  from  the  University  of  North  Carolina  at  Charlotte  included  an   attachment  to  his  Upwork  order  that  identified  his  institution  and  the  introductory  philosophy   class  he  was  looking  for  help  in.  A  few  days  later,  a  Ph.D.  candidate  in  Britain  went  on  the  same   site  to  solicit  help  with  his  dissertation.  A  document  he  attached  to  his  order  included  his  name   and  his  adviser’s.  

Some  of  the  most  explicit  exchanges  happen  on  Craigslist,  which  has  become  a  hub  of  cheating   activity.  Over  two  days  in  April,  The  Chronicle  analyzed  Craigslist  posts  in  seven  cities  in  which  a  

cheater  or  cheating  service  offered  to  complete  whole  courses  for  students.  The  search  turned   up  more  than  200  ads.  In  many  cases,  the  same  ads  ran  in  multiple  cities,  suggesting  a   coordinated  marketing  effort.  

Craigslist  posters  appealed  to  students  by  acknowledging  how  little  time  they  had  for  busywork.   "Online  classes  are  a  pain  in  the  ass,"  said  one  Chicago-­‐area  ad.  Others  outright  asked  students   to  hand  over  their  online  credentials.  "You  can  trust  us  with  your  login  and  password   information,"  said  a  Phoenix  post.  "We  will  do  every  section  of  your  online  class  including   discussion  boards,  tests,  assignments,  and  quizzes."  

The  Chronicle  exchanged  messages  with  several  Craigslist  posters  to  inquire  about  the  cost  of   their  service  and  how  it  worked.  One  person  who  has  posted  regularly  in  the  Los  Angeles  area   said  he  had  been  in  business  for  10  years  and  had  a  staff  of  "over  20  experts."  His  prices,  he   said,  depended  on  the  number  of  hours  it  would  take  to  complete  a  class,  not  how  well  a   student  wanted  to  do.  

"We  always  get  A’s  and  B’s,"  he  said  in  a  text  message.  "Calculation  based  classes  are  $750.  All   others  are  $600.  Anyone  quoting  different  is  not  a  pro  and  doesn’t  know  what  they  are  doing.   Cheap  quotes  =  F  grades.  

"Oh,"  he  added,  "and  you  can  split  up  the  payments."  

Another  poster  said  his  prices  depended  on  the  institution.  "A  course  from  Penn  State  World   Campus  requires  more  effort  than  a  course  from  Post  University,"  he  said  in  an  email.   "Previously,  I  completed  a  remedial  English  course  for  a  client  at  Kaplan  University.  This  person   requested  a  ‘B’  for  $90/week  for  eight  weeks.  Another  client  at  a  Cal  State  University  required   an  ‘A’  in  a  four  week  upper  division  Asian  Studies  course  for  $300/week."  

The  most  common  way  students  cheat  is  through  a  simple  web  search  —  typing,  for  example,   "essay,"  "essay  help,"  or  "write  my  essay."  As  many  as  half  of  the  visits  to  some  sites  used  for   cheating  come  through  search  engines,  The  Chronicle  found.  

The  companies  that  have  made  the  biggest  strides  in  the  business  have  mastered  the  search   game.  Search-­‐engine  optimization  efforts  have  helped  Ultius,  founded  in  2011,  grow  fast.  

The  Delaware-­‐based  company,  with  a  call  center  in  Las  Vegas,  has  hired  more  than  40   employees,  including  engineers  and  customer-­‐service  representatives,  according  to  job  ads.  It   has  contracted  with  more  than  1,400  writers.  

That  growth  has  coincided  with  a  surge  in  traffic.  Over  a  recent  three-­‐month  stretch,  the  site   drew  about  520,000  visits,  according  to  a  Chronicle  analysis  of  data  compiled  by  SimilarWeb.   Thirty  to  40  percent  of  Ultius’s  traffic  comes  from  students’  web  searches,  according  to   estimates  on  Alexa,  which  measures  internet  usage.  Ultius  is  the  No.  1  or  No.  2  search  result   that  pops  up  when  someone  Googles  "buy  a  term  paper,"  "buy  a  research  paper,"  or  about  a   dozen  other  phrases  that  indicate  an  intent  to  purchase  a  completed  assignment,  according  to   a  Chronicle  analysis  of  search  data  compiled  by  Spyfu,  a  search-­‐engine  optimization  tool.  

Boban  Dedovic,  27,  the  company’s  chairman,  helped  start  it  after  three  semesters  as  a  student   at  the  University  of  Maryland  at  College  Park,  during  which  he  worked  as  a  tutor.  To  him,  Ultius   is  a  technology  company  that  connects  customers  to  writers,  he  says  via  email.  

He  denies  that  Ultius  is  part  of  the  cheating  industry,  referring  to  it  as  a  "doc  prep  service."  In  a   written  statement,  the  company  says  it  works  hard  to  ensure  that  its  customers  don’t  misuse  its   services,  informing  them  of  its  fair-­‐use  policy  (that  its  work  is  meant  for  reference  only  and   must  be  properly  cited)  at  least  three  times  and  requiring  them  to  accept  it.  When  the  company   suspects  a  problem,  it  conducts  an  investigation,  drafts  an  internal  report,  and,  if  it  finds  a   violation,  disables  the  customer’s  account.  However,  the  company  says,  it  cannot  individually   monitor  every  one  of  its  orders.  

Ultius  protects  its  business  by  keeping  those  orders  private.  When  a  student  posts  an   assignment  on  Craigslist  or  other  sites,  looking  for  someone  to  pick  it  up,  Google  indexes  that   text,  making  it  visible  in  searches.  But  the  customer  experience  at  Ultius  occurs  behind  a  wall,  in   the  same  way  a  bank  keeps  its  clients’  information  private.  Because  Google  can’t  create  a   record  of  those  pages,  professors  wouldn’t  be  able  to  find  them.  

The  company’s  dealings  with  one  Ph.D.  candidate  illustrate  the  increasingly  complex  work  that   students  are  outsourcing,  while  faculty  members  remain  in  the  dark.  Last  year,  Ultius   contracted  with  a  student  who  described  herself  as  a  "single  active  duty  parent"  to  help  write  a   concept  paper  for  her  doctoral  program,  records  show.  The  job  included  revisions  requested  by   the  chair  of  her  dissertation  committee.  

The  Ph.D.  student  requested  that  Ultius  complete  a  literature  review  and  produce  a  theoretical   framework  for  her  dissertation.  The  order  required  the  company  to  find  data  on  migration   patterns  and  economic  growth  in  Jamaica,  and  to  apply  advanced  economic  theory.  The   company  did  the  work,  but  the  customer  was  so  displeased  with  it  that  she  filed  a  complaint   with  the  Better  Business  Bureau.  

Ultius  considers  customer  service  a  top  priority,  and  despite  19  complaints  in  the  past  three   years,  mainly  minor  beefs  over  papers  and  assignments,  it  maintains  an  A+  rating  from  the  BBB.  

The  Ph.D.  student  threatened  to  go  public  with  her  story,  but  more  often  it’s  the  paid  cheaters   who  make  threats.  After  Mr.  Sambrano,  the  high-­‐school  guidance  specialist,  transferred  $500  to   have  the  whole  course  at  Arizona  State  done  for  him,  he  stopped  hearing  from  his  Craigslist   cheater  and  filed  a  PayPal  claim  against  him.  The  cheater  advised  him  to  drop  the  claim  or  he’d   hand  over  evidence  of  the  arrangement  to  the  university.  Mr.  Sambrano,  afraid  he’d  be   expelled,  dropped  the  charge.  He  says  he  ended  up  doing  the  class  himself.  

In  another  case,  if  not  for  a  cheater  turning  a  student  in,  a  college  may  never  have  known  that   the  student  was  paying  someone  else  to  log  in  to  the  course  and  complete  the  work.  In  May  an   undergraduate  at  Colorado  State  University-­‐Global  Campus,  dissatisfied  with  the  quality  of  the   work  done  for  him,  filed  a  PayPal  claim.  Angered,  the  cheater  gave  the  student’s  name  to  the   instructor,  along  with  text  messages,  screen  shots  of  the  student’s  portal,  and  payment  records   detailing  how  the  student  had  arranged  to  have  the  entire  course  done  for  him,  says  Jon  M.   Bellum,  the  provost.  

CSU-­‐Global,  an  online  institution  with  about  15,000  students,  had  its  information-­‐technology   department  look  at  the  IP  addresses  used  for  the  student’s  coursework  and  found  more  than   one.  

Mr.  Bellum  would  not  disclose  the  penalty  the  student  faced,  citing  privacy  law,  but  says  such   abuses  can  result  in  expulsion.  Often,  though,  the  university  is  not  aware  of  the  violation.  

Colleges  have  tried  technology  to  combat  cheating.  Several  thousand  institutions  around  the   world  use  the  anti-­‐plagiarism  software  Turnitin,  which  says  it  has  a  database  of  some  600   million  papers.  But  a  recent  study  found  that  custom  work  is  "virtually  undetectable."  

Coursera,  an  online  education  platform  employed  by  dozens  of  prominent  colleges,  uses   webcams  and  "keyboard  dynamics,"  which  attempt  to  verify  students’  identities  on  the  basis  of   their  typing  patterns.  But  that  doesn’t  do  much  good  if  the  cheater  is  always  typing.  

CSU-­‐Global  says  it  spends  about  $60,000  a  year  administering  random  identity  checks  on  its   students.  The  tests  require  them  to  provide  answers  to  personal  questions  like  what  banks   service  their  loans  or  what  streets  they’ve  lived  on.  If  they  don’t  answer  accurately,  they  can’t   log  in  to  their  classes.  About  2  percent  of  identity  checks  result  in  students’  getting  locked  out   of  the  CSU  system.  

Other  institutions  have  blocked  access  to  sites  that  help  students  cheat.  Victor  Valley  College,  in   California,  has  prevented  anyone  on  a  campus  computer  from  accessing  the  website  of  Student   Network  Resources.  But  students  can  turn  to  their  own  laptops  or  other  devices.  

The  biggest  key  to  fighting  the  problem  is  faculty  engagement,  says  Tricia  Bertram  Gallant,  a   former  president  of  the  International  Center  for  Academic  Integrity.  She  often  speaks  with   professors  about  the  business,  she  says,  and  finds  them  surprised  that  someone  else  could  be   doing  students’  work.  

"When  I  tell  them  about  contract  cheating,  they’re  shocked,"  she  says.  "They  basically  say,   ‘What?  That  goes  on?’  "  

Others  are  in  denial  that  it  could  happen  in  their  classes.  And  even  those  who  know  about  it   and  want  to  stop  it  say  they’re  too  busy,  or  feel  that  the  fight  is  futile,  with  new  cheating   companies  popping  up  all  the  time.  

But  some  professors  are  catching  on.  Last  fall,  Megan  Elwood  Madden,  an  associate  professor   in  the  School  of  Geology  and  Geophysics  at  the  University  of  Oklahoma,  spotted  a  suspicious   passage  in  a  student’s  paper.  She  ran  it  through  Turnitin,  finding  several  plagiarized  sources  but   no  match  for  the  bulk  of  the  text.  So  she  Googled  the  student’s  research  topic  and  found  the   assignment  posted  on  Course  Hero  with  the  student’s  request  for  help.  

A  web  search  did  not  turn  up  the  text  the  student  had  handed  in,  because  it  was  hidden  in   Course  Hero’s  system.  But  once  Ms.  Elwood  Madden  had  logged  in  to  the  site,  she  could  see   communication  between  the  student  and  a  contractor  suggesting  that  the  student  had  had  the   work  completed  for  him,  the  professor  said  in  an  email.  

She  discovered  that  the  student  had  used  Course  Hero  to  arrange  work  in  at  least  four  other   classes  as  well.  The  revelations  led  the  university  to  expel  the  student.  

Such  stories  are  rare,  academic-­‐integrity  officers  say,  because  there  are  so  few  would-­‐be   enforcers  in  pursuit.  After  The  Chronicle  published  an  article  about  the  Western  Carolina  

experiment,  two  federal  law-­‐enforcement  officials  contacted  the  professors,  eager  to  hear   more  about  the  business.  

William  Josephson,  a  former  assistant  attorney  general  in  New  York  who  has  investigated  fraud,   says  companies  that  assume  false  identities  violate  federal  laws  governing  interstate   commerce.  Laws  in  at  least  17  states  prohibit  students  from  using  cheating  services  to  complete   their  assignments.  But  prosecutors  aren’t  enforcing  them.  

Faculty  members  on  the  front  lines  are  no  more  active.  That’s  also  true  in  other  countries   where  the  cheating  industry  has  developed.  This  spring,  Marcus  J.  Ball,  a  higher-­‐education   reformer  in  Britain,  came  across  an  advertisement  for  academic  cheating  services  on  the  wall  of   a  London  subway  station.  

The  ad  offended  Mr.  Ball,  who  began  emailing  college  administrators  and  professors,  trying  to   persuade  them  to  sign  a  petition  for  the  British  government  to  debate  the  issue  of  contract   cheating.  His  goal  was  to  create  a  "unified  block"  of  people  willing  to  stand  up  to  the  cheating   companies,  with  hopes  of  taking  the  fight  to  Canada,  the  United  States,  and  elsewhere.  

In  May,  Mr.  Ball  contacted  more  than  250  college  officials,  including  academic-­‐integrity  leaders   in  several  countries.  Only  five  responded.  

"Academics  are  constantly  complaining  about  the  essay-­‐mill  problem,"  he  said  in  the  email.  But   when  presented  with  a  "practical  way  forward  to  potentially  solve  the  problem,  they  don’t   engage."  

Last  year,  Ms.  Bertram  Gallant,  who  is  director  of  the  academic-­‐integrity  office  at  the  University   of  California  at  San  Diego,  organized  a  dozen  international  experts  to  study  the  growth  of   contract  cheating  and  how  to  stop  it.  

The  group  laid  out  a  series  of  big  goals.  Chief  among  them:  Mobilize  faculty  members  and   students  to  demand  laws  making  it  more  difficult  for  cheating  companies  to  operate.  It  is   creating  a  tool  kit  to  help  professors  detect  and  prevent  cheating.  And  it  is  organizing  an   international  awareness  day  to  bring  more  attention  to  the  problem.  

But  the  group  can  only  muster  so  much  fight.  "There’s  just  not  enough  of  us  who  care,"  says   Ms.  Bertram  Gallant.  "It’s  a  very  small  cadre  internationally  who  really  dedicate  our  lives  to   working  on  this  issue,  and  that’s  just  not  enough  people."  

College  leaders  haven’t  helped,  she  says.  Many  have  failed  to  make  the  issue  a  priority.  Few   colleges  have  academic-­‐integrity  offices,  she  says,  or  devote  dollars  to  the  problem.  

"There  is  a  lot  of  money  to  support  these  companies,  but  not  a  lot  of  money  to  support  our   research,"  she  says.  "All  the  money  is  going  to  the  illegal  part  of  the  industry,  and  none  of  it  is   going  to  combat  the  industry."  

Colleges  also  might  need  to  rethink  their  approach,  says  Ms.  Bertram  Gallant.  As  online   education  continues  to  grow,  and  cheating  companies  have  more  opportunities  to  infiltrate   classes,  institutions  would  do  well  to  enlist  people  with  the  skills  to  ferret  out  violations,  she   says.  While  educators  may  be  equipped  to  catch  plagiarism,  they  don’t  have  the  tools  to  track  a   paid  cheater  who  is  assuming  someone  else’s  identity.  

Instead,  colleges  continue  to  rely  on  proud  traditions  to  fight  the  scourge  of  cheating.  This  fall,   as  students  return  to  campus,  some  colleges  will  require  them  to  sign  an  honor  code.  Others   will  spell  out  for  them  the  potential  consequences  of  academic  dishonesty.  

In  October,  academic-­‐integrity  officials  at  the  University  of  Oklahoma  plan  to  hold  a  session  to   warn  new  students  about  paper  mills.  The  tool  they're  using  to  combat  cheating?  Tea  bags.  To   remind  the  students  of  the  importance  of  ethics,  the  university  is  encouraging  them  have  a  cup   of  "integri-­‐tea."  

Dan  Bauman  and  Ben  Myers  contributed  reporting  to  this  article.