Term Paper

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Feedback to Learner 5/28/17 1:10 AM

Your draft covered well the topics for the term paper.  

The following are some of the areas which could use more elaboration:

 

For rubric #7, looking for tools like make-or-buy analysis, procurement audit, market research, etc.

For Rubric #8, use of technology tools such as computer software for scheduling, resource management, and budget planning.

For Rubric #9, expectations in technology to more advancement in computer software for scheduling, resource management, and budget planning, etc. Check textbook for software being used for different Knowledge areas: Integration – Project mgt software – Cloud computing, AI (p. 172); Scope – p. 210 – Microsoft Project – WBS; Time – Microsoft project using templates (p. 250);Cost – fin ancial software (accounting), Portfolio Management software (p. 290); Quality – Testing tools – statistical software or Excel (p. 333); Risk – Simulation (p. 455); H/R –ERP (p. 379); Communications (p. 408) collaboration tools/ LinkedIn/Procurement (p. 485) – e-procurement; Stakeholders – (p. 508) – collaboration tools.

You also got a high Safe Assign similarity score of 46%.  You need to avoid too much cut and pasting. Visit this website for avoiding ;plagiarism: http://writing.wisc.edu/Handbook/Acknowledging_Sources.pdf

Dr. Lu

The paper was good overall it got a 71 out of a possible 75 points.