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Week 1

Nice job with the Constitution, Having said that, there was room for improvement:

· I would have liked to seen more than the minimum number of required sources.  

Otherwise, well done.

( 1.00 / 1.00) Describes One Strength of the U.S. Constitution

Distinguished - Clearly and comprehensively describes one strength of the U.S. Constitution in a complete and concise paragraph.

( 1.00 / 1.00) Describes One Weakness of the U.S. Constitution

Distinguished - Clearly and comprehensively describes one weakness of the U.S. Constitution in a complete and concise paragraph.

( 1.00 / 1.00) Recommends One Option to Maintain the Strength of the U.S. Constitution

Distinguished - Recommends one appropriate option to maintain the strength in a complete and concise paragraph.

( 1.00 / 1.00) Recommends One Option to Correct the Weakness of the U.S. Constitution

Distinguished - Recommends one appropriate option to correct the weakness of the U.S. Constitution in a complete and concise paragraph.

( 0.33 / 0.33) Written Communication: Control of Syntax and Mechanics

Distinguished - Displays meticulous comprehension and organization of syntax and mechanics, such as spelling and grammar. Written work contains no errors and is very easy to understand.

( 0.33 / 0.33) Written Communication: APA Formatting

Distinguished - Accurately uses APA formatting consistently throughout the paper, title page, and reference page.

( 0.30 / 0.34) Written Communication: Resource Requirement

Proficient - Uses the required number of scholarly sources to support ideas. All sources on the reference page are used and cited correctly within the body of the assignment.

Overall Score: 4.96 / 5.00

Overall Grade: 4.96

Week 2

Nice job with national policy, Having said that, there was room for improvement:

· I would have liked to seen more than the minimum number of required sources.  

Otherwise, well done.

( 1.00 / 1.00) Describes One Advantage to a National Policy That Must Be Implemented by One Agency of the Federal Bureaucracy

Distinguished - Clearly and comprehensively describes one advantage to a national policy that must be implemented by one agency of the federal bureaucracy in a complete and concise paragraph.

( 1.00 / 1.00) Describes One Disadvantage to a National Policy That Must Be Implemented by One Agency of the Federal Bureaucracy

Distinguished - Clearly and comprehensively describes one disadvantage to a national policy that must be implemented by one agency of the federal bureaucracy in a complete and concise paragraph.

( 1.00 / 1.00) Recommends One Option to Maintain the Advantage of the National Policy

Distinguished - Recommends one wholly appropriate option to maintain the advantage of the national policy in a complete and concise paragraph.

( 1.00 / 1.00) Recommends One Option to Improve the Disadvantage of the National Policy

Distinguished - Recommends one wholly appropriate option to improve the disadvantage of the national policy in a complete and concise paragraph.

( 0.33 / 0.33) Written Communication: Control of Syntax and Mechanics

Distinguished - Displays meticulous comprehension and organization of syntax and mechanics, such as spelling and grammar. Written work contains no errors and is very easy to understand.

( 0.33 / 0.33) Written Communication: APA Formatting

Distinguished - Accurately uses APA formatting consistently throughout the paper, title page, and reference page.

( 0.30 / 0.34) Written Communication: Resource Requirement

Proficient - Uses the required number of scholarly sources to support ideas. All sources on the reference page are used and cited correctly within the body of the assignment.

Overall Score: 4.96 / 5.00

Overall Grade: 4.96

Week 3

Nice job with the legislative branch,

( 1.00 / 1.00) Describes One Strength of One of the Three Branches of Government

Distinguished - Clearly and comprehensively describes one strength of one of the three branches of government in a complete and concise paragraph.

( 1.00 / 1.00) Describes One Weakness of One of the Three Branches of Government

Distinguished - Clearly and comprehensively describes one weakness of one of the three branches of government in a complete and concise paragraph.

( 1.00 / 1.00) Recommends One Option to Maintain the Strength

Distinguished - Recommends one wholly appropriate option to maintain the strength regarding one of the three branches of government in a complete and fully-developed paragraph.

( 1.00 / 1.00) Recommends One Option to Correct the Weakness

Distinguished - Recommends one wholly appropriate option to correct the weakness regarding one of the three branches of government in a complete and fully-developed paragraph.

( 0.33 / 0.33) Written Communication: Control of Syntax and Mechanics

Distinguished - Displays meticulous comprehension and organization of syntax and mechanics, such as spelling and grammar. Written work contains no errors and is very easy to understand.

( 0.33 / 0.33) Written Communication: APA Formatting

Distinguished - Accurately uses APA formatting consistently throughout the paper, title page, and reference page.

( 0.34 / 0.34) Written Communication: Resource Requirement

Distinguished - Uses more than the required number of scholarly sources, providing compelling evidence to support ideas. All sources on the reference page are used and cited correctly within the body of the assignment.

Overall Score: 5.00 / 5.00

Overall Grade: 5

Week4

Nice job with political parties, Having said that, there was room for improvement:

· I would have liked to seen more than the minimum number of required sources.  

· You needed a thesis statement.

Otherwise, well done.

( 1.00 / 1.00) Describes One Positive Impact of Political Parties, Interest Groups, or Elections

Distinguished - Clearly and comprehensively describes one positive impact of political parties, interest groups, or elections in a complete and concise paragraph.

( 1.00 / 1.00) Describes One Negative Impact of Either: Political Parties, Interest Groups, or Elections

Distinguished - Clearly and comprehensively describes one negative impact of political parties, interest groups, or elections in a complete and concise paragraph.

( 1.00 / 1.00) Recommends One Option to Accentuate the Positive Impact of the Political Party, Interest Group, or Elections

Distinguished - Recommends one wholly appropriate option to accentuate the positive impact of political parties, interest groups, or elections in a complete and concise paragraph.

( 1.00 / 1.00) Recommends One Option to Lessen the Negative Impact of the Political Party, Interest Group, or Elections

Distinguished - Recommends one wholly appropriate option to lessen the negative impact of political parties, interest groups, or elections in a complete and concise paragraph.

( 0.00 / 0.50) Provides a Thesis Statement for the Final Paper

Non-Performance - The thesis statement is either nonexistent or lacks the components described in the assignment instructions.

( 0.50 / 0.50) Written Communication: Control of Syntax and Mechanics

Distinguished - Displays meticulous comprehension and organization of syntax and mechanics, such as spelling and grammar. Written work contains no errors and is very easy to understand.

( 0.50 / 0.50) Written Communication: APA Formatting

Distinguished - Accurately uses APA formatting consistently throughout the paper, title page, and reference page.

( 0.44 / 0.50) Written Communication: Resource Requirement

Proficient - Uses the required number of scholarly sources to support ideas. All sources on the reference page are used and cited correctly within the body of the assignment.

Overall Score: 5.44 / 6.00

Overall Grade: 5.44