Final Strategic Plan
Hello Melissa:
Thanks for submitting your Business Model – Part I. The idea of opening a new division at The Mars Hospitality Groups is interesting, viable, and trendy, as well as may have great potential. You have presented a well structured, well-defined first phase of your strategic business plan. This is where the idea is evaluated for originality and viability. Excellent description of how this new business will address customers’ needs to establish competitive advantage in the competitive marketplace. Very good paper.
The only recommendation for improvement is:
· Insert some statistic that shows who the key players in this field are. If you want to be the leading entity, you need to know whom you will lead.
Please see a few notes regarding APA formatting.
See rubric below for grade:
Strategic Plan Part 1: New Product or Service
BUS/475
April 27, 2017
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Strategic Plan Part 1: New Product or Service
Executive Summary
The coordination between the company’s vision, mission, and core values is very crucial in influencing growth and success of an organization. Strategic business planning tools should be employed in this dynamic contemporary business environment since they are the most fundamental mechanism through which competitive edge can be created and sustained for the organization to reach its goals and objectives over time. The company’s mission, vision and value proposition have been known to contribute significantly to the strategic direction of the company and thus should always be taken into consideration during the planning process by Mars Hospitality Groups (McNamara 2013). In essence, the top management official of the Mars Hospitality Groups should analyze the needs and expectation of the customers, needs of its shareholders and the employees to ensure it uses the efficacy of the strategic decisions that they make. In order for any company to achieve its strategic objectives and goals, there is a need to come up with the appropriate mission and vision statements and this will form the basis of all the subsequent decisions that the management of Mars hospitality Group will make at any point in time. Comment by RCORDERO: Indeed. Strategic planning is crucial to define a company’s direction, market position, and projection. Comment by RCORDERO: comma here
In this paper, the focus is on a new product/service to be introduced in a new division in Mars Hospitality groups. This company mainly specializes in the management of hotels and clubs on contract basis and thus provides guests with the best available hospitality care they deserve.
Existing Business
Vision Statement
The vision statement is one of the major tools that form the crucial component of the strategic planning in an organization. It explains to the world the image of the company and what it is aspiring to be or achieve in the near future (Armstrong 1986). The vision statement is actually the idealistic version of how the company will appear in the event that all objectives are achieved in the company.
Mars Hospitality Groups Division v ision Comment by RCORDERO: Capital V
The vision statement of Mars Hospitality Groups Division is: To be the world’s leading Hospitality Company in provision of imaginable hospitality care in places where nobody would be willing to deliver and create a brand that will be globally recognized.
Mission
The company’s mission statement is the second most important element of the strategic planning process in any organization. According to Newth (2012), company’s mission statement acts as the reference point when making crucial decisions for the company. The mission is always reflected in the general sentiments displayed by the consumers of the company’s service or products. In this case, the consumers should be at ease in identifying the ethics and values which are promoted by the company in the external environment.
Mars Hospitality Groups Division mission
The Mars Hospitality Groups Division’s mission statement is: With total commitment to quality service to its customers, Mars Hospitality Group will seek to provide customers with very affordable honeymoon hospitality services to any destination around world. To explore new markets for an adventure by providing world-class outdoor hospitality experience to our clients while still putting the interest of shareholders ahead.
According to the company's website, the actual mission of the main company is to deliver quality hospitality services to their customers and work hard to build loyalty. According to the formulated mission for the division, these two missions have a correlation in the sense that the division is trying to promote a fresh idea that has never been done before which will attract new sales and build a lasting brand. Comment by RCORDERO: its Comment by RCORDERO: statements
Core values/guiding principles
The company’s core values are basically the guiding principles that are directs the actions and behaviors of shareholders and employees of the division. The communication of these guiding principles to the shareholders is likely to give the division an opportunity to request for more funds in order to facilitate their capital-intensive activities. The successful interaction and mix of the company’s operational decisions and guiding principles will clearly enable the customers to identify the major elements in the division's business model that is employed.
The division ought to provide exceptional service to its customers especially in situations where customers demand the unique service. The company will ensure that there is a well-established corporate social responsibility aspect that will form part of the company’s culture. The company’s guiding principles will enable it to take part in solving the socioeconomic problems of the communities in which it operates in. Coexisting harmoniously with the community and acting ethically will enable the company to gain a competitive edge since it will attract and retain more customers by creating a good image and this will translate to increased revenues for the division and the company. Comment by RCORDERO: This is an excellent point. It is the principle of Corporate Social Responsibility.
New product proposed
The Mars Hospitality Groups new division aims to provide a gateway hospitality package to clients on vacation or those enticed by the adventure to a destination that no other company would be willing to set a shop. A good example is making newlywed couples to enjoy a good moment on top of Mount Everest at a pocket friendly cost. This is the new product that is proposed in the division. The essence of this is to deliver what the current tastes and preference of some of the customers are shifting to. This unique service will serve a special group of customers and attract and retain more customers than what was anticipated. Based on the vision of the division; this will new service is expected to create a brand that will be globally competitive.
Customer needs and Competitive Advantage Comment by RCORDERO: With the exception of prepositions and conjunctions, all first letters in the first and second-level headings are capitalized.
Mars Hospitality new division can be able to gain a competitive edge by solving the needs of customers in the hospitality industry if the management, the shareholders and employees can act in tandem with the core values of the company. In order to achieve this, the executive should also budget sufficient financial resources in order to facilitate the first few world trips at a slightly lower price and this will enable the customers to gain interest and subscribe to the packages for the unique product.
The division values the customers and their ideas and thus the decision to choose the destination is left for the customers to choose. The ideas and suggestions from the customers form the basis of decision making for the division. This enables the customers to feel valued and greatly acknowledged by the company and in this way; the company will have a competitive advantage over its competitors who might be selecting the destination for their clients.
Business model for New Division
The vision of the division is to be the world’s leading Hospitality Company in provision of imaginable hospitality care in places where nobody would be willing to deliver and create a brand that will be globally recognized. The business model that will be most appropriate for this kind of business would be generating services in which the division will standardize a predetermined bundle of the services that it will offer to various destinations and entice the consumers to purchase them together at a certain fixed price or cost that will be equivalent to the price of a certain products. The business model usually incorporates the aspect of flat fee pricing. Another business model that might be applicable would be offering of products or services where whatever the division deals in is made to be part of the larger offering (Osterwalder, A., & Pigneur, Y. (2010). Comment by RCORDERO: Exclude the authors’ first initials.
Strategic Direction
Kefer (2014) argued that for strategic plans to be implemented in the division; there should be a clear communication and interpretation of company's mission, vision, and the core values. The managers and employees should also have a clearly defined goals and objectives which for the major pillars of organization business model. The top management officials at Mars hospitality Groups are supposed to come up with goods decisions and company strategic directions that will be fundamental in facilitating the growth of company's core values. Continuous employee training should be established in order to ensure that employees remain competent and offer the best quality services to consumers and at the same time grow the company's brand through the innovation of unique products and high level of differentiation.
Conclusion
In conclusion, Mars Hospitality groups can better communicate the core values that the company holds through ensuring that the values are embedded in the vision and mission statements of the company. This will form the driving force and the guidelines by which good decisions are to be made by the division’s managers. Mars Hospitality groups should be able to identify and define the objectives and goals of every stakeholder and this will offer directions on how to carry out activities and business operations within the company. In addition, a good strategy plan will enable the company to attract new markets and a good number of business prospects which might be good and will guarantee success to the firm in both short run and the long-run. The strategy has the capacity and ability to improve the values of the company’s shareholders and also provide the company with a competitive advantage over its competitors in the hospitality industry.
References
Armstrong J (1986) The value of formal planning for strategic decisions
Kefer, S. (2014). A guide to developing mission, vision, and value statements.
McNamara, P., Peck, S. I., & Sasson, A. (2013). Competing business models, value creation, and appropriation in English football. Long Range Planning, 46(6), 475-487.
Newth, F. (2012). Business Models and Strategic Management: A Modular Approach. New York: Business Expert Press.
Osterwalder, A., & Pigneur, Y. (2010). Business model generation: a handbook for visionaries,
game changers, and challengers. John Wiley & Sons.
MAX POINTS
YOUR
8.0
SCORE
Content and Conceptualization:
1. Propose a new product or service for the
new company division.
0.720.72
2. Describe how the division addresses
customer needs and achieves competitive
advantage.
0.720.72
3. Create a vision and a business model for
this new division.
0.640.64
4. Explain how the vision, mission, and value
of the new division align with the company's
mission and vision.
0.640.64
5. Summarize how the vision, mission, and
values guide the division's strategic
direction.
0.640.64
6. Define your guiding principles and values
for your division in the context of culture,
social responsibility, and ethics.
0.640.64
20%1.601.60
5%0.400.40
Spelling, Grammar, Proper use of words
5%0.400.40
APA format
20%1.601.55
See notes for corrections
-0.0
TOTAL POINTS
100%8.0
8.0
Writing Clarity
Late Submission (deduction)
WRITTEN ASSIGNMENT - GRADING RUBRIC
Description
%REMARKS
Logical organization of thoughts, ideas, and
structure
50%
MGT312
| WRITTEN ASSIGNMENT - GRADING RUBRIC | |||||
| Description | % | MAX POINTS | YOUR | REMARKS | |
| 10.0 | SCORE | ||||
| Content and Conceptualization: | 50% | ||||
| Analyze the relationship between: | |||||
| 1. Do you agree with your assessment results? Explain why or why not. | 10% | 1.00 | 1.00 | ||
| 2. What do you see as your strengths and weaknesses regarding working on a team? | 10% | 1.00 | 1.00 | ||
| 3. Have you ever engaged in social loafing while on a team? Why or why not? | 10% | 1.00 | 1.00 | ||
| 4. How does working effectively on a team give you an advantage in the workplace? | 10% | 1.00 | 1.00 | ||
| 5. How does the effectiveness of the team members influence the group's development process? of existing business. | 10% | 1.00 | 1.00 | ||
| Logical organization of thoughts, ideas, and structure | 20% | 2.00 | 2.00 | ||
| Writing Clarity | 5% | 0.50 | 0.50 | ||
| Spelling, Grammar, Proper use of words | 5% | 0.50 | 0.50 | ||
| APA format | 20% | 2.00 | 1.95 | See notes in paper for corrections. | |
| Late Submission (deduction) | - | 0.0 | |||
| TOTAL POINTS | 100% | 10.0 | 10.0 |
MKT431
| WRITTEN ASSIGNMENT - GRADING RUBRIC | |||||
| Description | % | MAX POINTS | YOUR | REMARKS | |
| 10.0 | SCORE | ||||
| Content and Conceptualization: | 50% | ||||
| LIVE PLAN - PART II: Competition | |||||
| 1. Key Metrics section completed | 20% | 2.00 | 1.00 | See notes in the paper for recommendations | |
| 2. Industry Benchmarks section completed (industry, geographic region, and company size.) | 15% | 1.50 | 1.50 | ||
| 3. Milestones section completed | 15% | 1.50 | 0.50 | See notes in the paper for recommendations | |
| Logical organization of thoughts, ideas, and structure | 20% | 2.00 | 2.00 | ||
| Writing Clarity | 5% | 0.50 | 0.50 | ||
| Spelling, Grammar, Proper use of words | 5% | 0.50 | 0.40 | See notes in the paper for corrections | |
| APA format | 20% | 2.00 | 1.65 | See notes in the paper for corrections | |
| Late Submission (deduction) | - | 0.0 | |||
| TOTAL POINTS | 100% | 10.0 | 7.6 |
MKT431 (TEAMS)
| WRITTEN ASSIGNMENT - GRADING RUBRIC | |||||
| Description | % | MAX POINTS | YOUR | REMARKS | |
| 10.0 | SCORE | ||||
| Content and Conceptualization: | 50% | ||||
| 1. Buyer Information section completed | 17% | 1.70 | 1.70 | ||
| 2. Selling Position section completed | 17% | 1.70 | 1.70 | ||
| 3. Business Analysis section completed | 16% | 1.60 | 1.60 | ||
| Logical organization of thoughts, ideas, and structure | 20% | 2.00 | 2.00 | ||
| Writing Clarity | 5% | 0.50 | 0.40 | See notes in paper for corrrections | |
| Spelling, Grammar, Proper use of words | 5% | 0.50 | 0.30 | See notes in paper for corrrections | |
| APA format | 20% | 2.00 | 0.50 | See notes in paper for corrrections. No references used | |
| Late Submission (deduction) | - | 0.0 | |||
| TOTAL POINTS | 100% | 10.0 | 8.2 |
MGT498
| WRITTEN ASSIGNMENT - GRADING RUBRIC | |||||
| Description | % | MAX POINTS | REMARKS | ||
| 10.0 | SCORE | ||||
| Content and Conceptualization: | 50% | ||||
| 1. The Strategic Management Plan covers the areas of environmental scanning, strategy formulation, strategy implementation, and evaluation and control. | 30% | 3.00 | 2.50 | The results of Riordan's SWOTT analysis were not included in the final paper. See additional comments in paper about this section. | |
| 2. The Strategic Management Plan reflects the implementation of concepts in Strategic Management and Business Policy | 10% | 1.00 | 1.00 | ||
| 3. The Strategic Management Plan demonstrates exhaustive analysis of the Riordan's case study | 10% | 1.00 | 1.00 | ||
| Logical organization of thoughts, ideas, and structure | 20% | 2.00 | 2.00 | ||
| Writing Clarity | 5% | 0.50 | 0.40 | See notes in paper for corrections | |
| Spelling, Grammar, Proper use of words | 5% | 0.50 | 0.40 | See notes in paper for corrections | |
| APA format | 20% | 2.00 | 1.75 | See notes in paper for corrections | |
| Late Submission (deduction) | - | 0.0 | |||
| TOTAL POINTS | 100% | 10.0 | 9.1 |
BUS475
| WRITTEN ASSIGNMENT - GRADING RUBRIC | |||||||
| Description | % | MAX POINTS | YOUR | REMARKS | |||
| 10.0 | SCORE | ||||||
| Content and Conceptualization: | 50% | ||||||
| 1. Previous phases in the business plan (Phase I, II, and III) included following the recommended outline | WITH CORRECTIONS | . | 25% | 2.50 | 2.25 | There is only one mention in a short sentence regarding the supply chain. | |
| Week 5 Additional Content | |||||||
| 2. Executive summary defining the new division of existing business. | 5% | 0.50 | 0.50 | ||||
| 3. Marketing and information technology strategies and tactics. | 5% | 0.50 | 0.25 | There is no indication of the Information Technology strategy | |||
| 4. Three methods to monitor and control your proposed strategic plan. | 5% | 0.50 | 0.50 | ||||
| 5. Ethical issues faced by the organization, and Summary of the legal and regulatory issues faced by the organization. | 5% | 0.50 | 0.50 | ||||
| 6. Plagiarism check report | 5% | 0.50 | 0.50 | ||||
| Logical organization of thoughts, ideas, and structure | 20% | 2.00 | 2.00 | ||||
| Writing Clarity | 5% | 0.50 | 0.50 | ||||
| Spelling, Grammar, Proper use of words | 5% | 0.50 | 0.40 | See notes in paper for corrections | |||
| APA format | 20% | 2.00 | 1.75 | See notes in paper for corrections | |||
| Late Submission (deduction) | - | ||||||
| TOTAL POINTS | 100% | 10.0 | 9.2 | ||||
BUS475 (team)
| WRITTEN ASSIGNMENT - GRADING RUBRIC | |||||
| Description | % | MAX POINTS | YOUR | REMARKS | |
| 6.0 | SCORE | ||||
| Content and Conceptualization: | 50% | ||||
| 1. Evidence of reviewing other peers' plans is portrayed in the team paper. | 15% | 0.90 | 0.90 | ||
| 2. The team analysis is based on content, plan depth, and product viability. | 20% | 1.20 | 1.20 | ||
| 3. Suggestions were provided to the team member on how to improve the plan. | 15% | 0.90 | 0.90 | ||
| Logical organization of thoughts, ideas, and structure | 20% | 1.20 | 1.20 | ||
| Writing Clarity | 5% | 0.30 | 0.30 | ||
| Spelling, Grammar, Proper use of words | 5% | 0.30 | 0.30 | ||
| APA format | 20% | 1.20 | 1.15 | See notes in paper for corrections | |
| Late Submission (deduction) | - | 0.0 | |||
| TOTAL POINTS | 100% | 6.0 | 6.0 | ||
COM295
| WRITTEN ASSIGNMENT - GRADING RUBRIC | |||||
| Description | % | MAX POINTS | YOUR | REMARKS | |
| 20.0 | SCORE | ||||
| Content and Conceptualization: | 50% | ||||
| 1. Convince your audience to invest capital resources to develop the product or service | 10% | 2.00 | 2.00 | ||
| 2. Gain credibility to make your readers believe your product/service will benefit the company. | 10% | 2.00 | 2.00 | ||
| 3. Include secondary research to support your argument | 10% | 2.00 | 2.00 | ||
| 4. Explain what you will do in case the selected product or service does not initially sell as much as expected. | 10% | 2.00 | 0.00 | This section wass not covered in the Memo | |
| 5. Indicate potential digital channels for marketing your product or service. | 10% | 2.00 | 2.00 | ||
| Logical organization of thoughts, ideas, and structure | 20% | 4.00 | 4.00 | ||
| Writing Clarity | 5% | 1.00 | 1.00 | ||
| Spelling, Grammar, Proper use of words | 5% | 1.00 | 0.85 | See notes in the paper for corrections | |
| APA format | 20% | 4.00 | 3.50 | See notes in the paper for corrections. No references used. | |
| Late Submission (deduction) | - | 0.0 | |||
| TOTAL POINTS | 100% | 20.0 | 17.4 |
MGT411
| WRITTEN ASSIGNMENT - GRADING RUBRIC | |||||
| Description | % | MAX POINTS | YOUR | REMARKS | |
| 8.0 | SCORE | ||||
| Content and Conceptualization: | |||||
| 1. Propose a new product or service for the new company division. | 9% | 50% | 0.72 | 0.72 | |
| 2. Describe how the division addresses customer needs and achieves competitive advantage. | 9% | 0.72 | 0.72 | ||
| 3. Create a vision and a business model for this new division. | 8% | 0.64 | 0.64 | ||
| 4. Explain how the vision, mission, and value of the new division align with the company's mission and vision. | 8% | 0.64 | 0.64 | ||
| 5. Summarize how the vision, mission, and values guide the division's strategic direction. | 8% | 0.64 | 0.64 | ||
| 6. Define your guiding principles and values for your division in the context of culture, social responsibility, and ethics. | 8% | 0.64 | 0.64 | ||
| Logical organization of thoughts, ideas, and structure | 20% | 1.60 | 1.60 | ||
| Writing Clarity | 5% | 0.40 | 0.40 | ||
| Spelling, Grammar, Proper use of words | 5% | 0.40 | 0.40 | ||
| APA format | 20% | 1.60 | 1.55 | See notes for corrections | |
| Late Submission (deduction) | - | 0.0 | |||
| TOTAL POINTS | 100% | 8.0 | 8.0 |
LDR531 (TEAMS)
| WRITTEN ASSIGNMENT - GRADING RUBRIC | |||||
| Description | % | MAX POINTS | YOUR | REMARKS | |
| 2.0 | SCORE | ||||
| Content and Conceptualization: | 50% | ||||
| 1. Evidence of completing the 360 assessment. | 10% | 0.20 | 0.20 | ||
| 2. Discuss the benefits of using this assessment as a tool. | 20% | 0.40 | 0.40 | ||
| 3. Detail the findings of the 360 assessment. | 20% | 0.40 | 0.40 | ||
| Logical organization of thoughts, ideas, and structure | 20% | 0.40 | 0.40 | ||
| Writing Clarity | 5% | 0.10 | 0.10 | ||
| Spelling, Grammar, Proper use of words | 5% | 0.10 | 0.10 | ||
| APA format | 20% | 0.40 | 0.35 | See notes in paper for corrections | |
| Late Submission (deduction) | - | 0.0 | |||
| TOTAL POINTS | 100% | 2.0 | 2.0 |
STR581
| WRITTEN ASSIGNMENT - GRADING RUBRIC | |||||
| Description | % | MAX POINTS | YOUR | REMARKS | |
| 10.0 | SCORE | ||||
| Content and Conceptualization: | 50% | ||||
| 1. The document integrated all strategic plan development phases (i.e., formulation, implementation, and control) | 20% | 2.00 | 2.00 | ||
| 2. The final strategic plan has relevancy, applicability, and integrates the concepts learned in STR/581 | 15% | 1.50 | 1.50 | ||
| 3. The final strategic plan is substantiated with academic, organizational, and industry research (data and sources) | 15% | 1.50 | 1.50 | ||
| Logical organization of thoughts, ideas, and structure | 20% | 2.00 | 2.00 | ||
| Writing Clarity | 5% | 0.50 | 0.50 | ||
| Spelling, Grammar, Proper use of words | 5% | 0.50 | 0.45 | See notes in paper for corrections | |
| APA format | 20% | 2.00 | 1.75 | See notes in paper for corrections | |
| Late Submission (deduction) | - | 0.0 | |||
| TOTAL POINTS | 100% | 10.0 | 9.7 | ||
MGT521
| WRITTEN ASSIGNMENT - GRADING RUBRIC | |||||
| Description | % | MAX POINTS | YOUR | REMARKS | |
| 5.0 | SCORE | ||||
| Content and Conceptualization: | 50% | ||||
| 1. Performance gaps clearly identified in the Balance Scorecard chart | 25% | 1.25 | 1.25 | ||
| 2. Recommended actions to reduce the performance gaps | 25% | 1.25 | 0.50 | See recommendations in the Balanced Scorecard analysis | |
| Logical organization of thoughts, ideas, and structure | 20% | 1.00 | 1.00 | ||
| Writing Clarity | 5% | 0.25 | 0.25 | ||
| Spelling, Grammar, Proper use of words | 5% | 0.25 | 0.25 | ||
| APA format | 20% | 1.00 | 1.00 | ||
| Late Submission (deduction) | - | 0.0 | |||
| TOTAL POINTS | 100% | 5.0 | 4.3 |
OI 361
| WRITTEN ASSIGNMENT - GRADING RUBRIC | |||||
| Description | % | MAX POINTS | YOUR | REMARKS | |
| 15.0 | SCORE | ||||
| Content and Conceptualization: | 50% | ||||
| 1. How would you identify and characterize the roles of incentives, training, and education in promoting innovation in your organization? | 15% | 2.25 | 2.25 | ||
| 2. What is the role of leadership in creating, managing, and sustaining innovation in your organization? | 15% | 2.25 | 2.25 | ||
| 3. What are the ethical implications of an individual reward system? Support your answer. | 10% | 1.50 | 1.50 | ||
| 4. Would you describe your organization as innovative or noninnovative? Explain your answer. | 10% | 1.50 | 1.50 | ||
| Logical organization of thoughts, ideas, and structure | 20% | 3.00 | 3.00 | ||
| Writing Clarity | 5% | 0.75 | 0.75 | ||
| Spelling, Grammar, Proper use of words | 5% | 0.75 | 0.70 | See notes in paper for corrections | |
| APA format | 20% | 3.00 | 2.85 | See notes in paper for corrections | |
| Late Submission (deduction) | - | 0.00 | |||
| TOTAL POINTS | 100% | 15.0 | 14.8 |
MKT421
| WRITTEN ASSIGNMENT - GRADING RUBRIC | |||||
| Description | % | MAX POINTS | YOUR | REMARKS | |
| 10.0 | SCORE | ||||
| Content and Conceptualization: | 50% | ||||
| 1. Choose and describe the target market for your product. | 10% | 1.00 | 1.00 | ||
| 2. Create a new product which would appeal to your market. | 10% | 1.00 | 1.00 | ||
| 3. Develop at least one question for each characteristic of the target market (demographic, geographic, psychographic, and behavioral) | 10% | 1.00 | 1.00 | ||
| 4. Recommend the best methods of conducting marketing research to answer these questions. | 10% | 1.00 | 1.00 | ||
| 5. Outline the steps you will take to bring your product to market from idea generation to commercialization | 10% | 1.00 | 1.00 | ||
| Logical organization of thoughts, ideas, and structure | 20% | 2.00 | 2.00 | ||
| Writing Clarity | 5% | 0.50 | 0.50 | ||
| Spelling, Grammar, Proper use of words | 5% | 0.50 | 0.45 | See notes in paper for corrections | |
| APA format | 20% | 2.00 | 1.90 | See notes in paper for corrections | |
| Late Submission (deduction) | - | ||||
| TOTAL POINTS | 100% | 10.0 | 9.9 | ||
MKT571
| WRITTEN ASSIGNMENT - GRADING RUBRIC | |||||
| Description | % | MAX POINTS | YOUR | REMARKS | |
| 10.0 | SCORE | ||||
| Content and Conceptualization: | 50% | ||||
| 1. Executive Summary | 5% | 0.50 | 0.35 | Need to reformat. See notes. | |
| 2. Situational Analysis | 5% | 0.50 | 0.50 | ||
| 3. Pricing, Segmentation, Target Market, and Positioning | 5% | 0.50 | 0.20 | Pricing strategy not specified. Positioning strategy not specified. | |
| 4. Marketing Communications Plan | 5% | 0.50 | 0.10 | This section needs improvement. See notes. | |
| 5. Financial information | 5% | 0.50 | 0.50 | ||
| 6. Marketing objectives for Year1, Year2, and Year3. | 5% | 0.50 | 0.50 | ||
| 7. Implementation milestones. | 5% | 0.50 | 0.50 | ||
| 8. Evaluation and control metrics | 5% | 0.50 | 0.50 | ||
| 9. Contingency planning | 5% | 0.50 | 0.50 | ||
| 10. Potential legal or ethical considerations | 5% | 0.50 | 0.50 | ||
| Logical organization of thoughts, ideas, and structure | 20% | 2.00 | 2.00 | ||
| Writing Clarity | 5% | 0.50 | 0.50 | ||
| Spelling, Grammar, Proper use of words | 5% | 0.50 | 0.40 | See notes in paper for corrections | |
| APA format | 20% | 2.00 | 1.75 | See notes in paper for corrections | |
| Late Submission (deduction) | - | 0.0 | |||
| TOTAL POINTS | 100% | 10.0 | 8.8 |