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In ,,The Journey"" Mary Oliver writes that there are many voices and opinions around

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fear and anxiety. The speaker thinks the advice is bad, and it will hold her back, and it will be a

burden to him/her. The speaker finds out his/her voice is louder than others, the speaker finally

knows who she/he is and what to do.

Furthermore, valuing our time can make our life become valuable. As people mature,

in addition, we need to believe in ourselves and listen to our own voice. The society

and our family make us follow their way that we don't like. These are all their thinking and ideas

they are afraid to take risk, because they become more ratignal.lls.{easier to do something they

what to do, w.hen they are youth. The authpr clarify. "it was already late/ enough, and a wild\- i -.,'' -) night, and the road full of fallen/ branc[es h*d{fones."(19-22). Since time is limited, people I E

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should make the best use of their time. This is hard for people to control and difficult to hnd their \t Y4

/'-- f -'L+ paths. but nobody can srop them from doing *hat rh1(uants to do. Therefore people should srart

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determining to do something for themselves. Once they pass the time for doing what they love to ,,ik 2./

do, they won't have any more chances. --." \f

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family are annoying and These are all around the house and contain a lot of

r.l,ithout considering our thought. The author cons

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:-."(3 1 -34).

Moreover, people should not tly to correct our habi$nd notionFWe have our own way to

do things and that are the sPecial c , "Mend my

lit-el/ each voice cried."(1 family, and he/she

ask to get away with those voices' r. In other words, we should change

ourselves instead of change other people's mind. We are the only people can influence and

change ourselves. Understanding what we want to be and try to tum into to a better us.

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