FIX MY PAPER ACCORDING TO MY TEACHER REQUIREMENTS

My teacher comments

· Try to be clearer in your introduction.

· Make sure it is clear exactly what form of organized crime you are looking into, what theory of social control you will use to understand our responses to it and also how big you believe the issue is. 

· You should cite more sources. There are none in your introduction and only one in the first four paragraphs where you are discussing definitions. 

· Section on constructions also needs references. 

· You should do more to tie in your writing about 'crime control' to the paragraphs about social control. Does the depiction of the rational offender justify the methods of crime control that you described?

· You should not to explaining why the Russian mafia do what they do, more whether there is evidence that they are a serious threat. Should have a decisive conclusion

· Also find some book quotes and put in the paper. Find intext citation and reference on the same