business plan

1. And.a 30% market share is a pretty lofty expectation. It may be doable, but...even 2-5%would be a lot of money.

Lastly, an twenty dollar delivery prices may be high, check the competitors prices. Plus, you never stated what the company's percentage of that price is?

2. ‘How can you build a for-profit, IPO intended, business using volunteers.

Also...I don't understand how it is different from other delivery services. And, on your Marketing Schedule there's no cost associated with Media.”

3 . This set is not any better than the last one. I suggest you totally redo your fiancials and resend them to me during edit submission week. Your fixed operating and start-up expenses are way too high. You're showing losses "across the board" and your line of credit is astronomic.