Research Paper

Feedback to Learner4/7/17 9:23 PM

This is a good outline Calvin and should make writing the paper a lot easier. However, please note that you were supposed to have your topic cleared by me beforehand. Since you did not check in for your topic to be approved, I took five points off the grade. I will approve your topic since it is still available. Also, the structure of the outline is not quite correct. The outline was also supposed to follow the skeleton format that was provided in the e-mailed example. Please note that the abstract and conclusion should not be written yet. If you think about it, how can you summarize a paper that is not yet written? There also needs to be an annotated bibliography at the end and at least five peer-reviewed sources need to be listed. Please also include the city and state where the books were published. I made a few other minor corrections and comments in the outline. I look forward to reading your paper. Keep up the good work