assignment for Topic safety

CATEGORY

Excellent-4

Above Average-3

Average-2

Below Average-1

score

Introduction

The introduction touches briefly on the significant parts of the presentation, coupled with the thesis statement. It begins with a topic statement

The introduction includes theses but does not go on to elaborate briefly on the significant portions of the essay.

The introduction includes significant portions of the presentation but lacks a thesis statement

The introduction touches casually on the significant portions of the presentation and lacks a thesis statement

4/

Content

The presentation covers all of the important areas of the topic( safety and injury prevention) sequentially presented)

The presentation covers all the important aspects of the topic, but lacks sequential connection between the overall points of the topic ( safety and injury prevention)

The presentation covers all significant areas of the topic ( safety and injury prevention). Presentation is however shallow, and not in depth.

The presentation touches casually on all significant parts of the topic (safety and injury prevention) points are ambiguous and questionable. Sequential connection and logical flow is lacking

4/

Examples

Each significant portion is coupled with a real life example in support. The correlation between the example and the topic is established

The examples are mentioned but the correlation between them and the topic are unclear

The examples are mentioned although the correlation between them and the topic are not clear

The examples mentioned are hardly related to the topic hence rendering a co-relation useless

4/

Objectives

The presentation includes a minimum of five SMART objectives all related to the topic

The number of objectives given are less than the designated five but are SMART

The presentation includes SMART objectives however the number of non-SMART objectives are more than the SMART ones

Presentation does not include SMART objectives or objectives at all.

4/

Conclusion

The conclusion restates the thesis statement and provides a brief overview of what has been covered within the cause of the presentation plus the actual recommendation

The conclusion lacks one the elements mentioned

The conclusion lacks more than one of the elements mentioned

The conclusion has no inclusion of the elements mentioned

4/