yuanyuan==hist101-final paper---5 pages

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Course Paper Writing Rubric
A score of 0 may be given in any category for compositions that are entirely illegible or otherwise unscorable: blank responses, responses written in a foreign language, restatements of the prompt, responses that are off-topic or incoherent.
Thesis, Focus, and Content (120 points)
CATEGORY 24 - Above Standards 20 - Meets Standards 16 - Approaching Standards 12 - Below Standards 0 or No Score
Focus or Thesis Statement The thesis statement names the topic iof the essay and outlines the main points to be discussed. The thesis statement names the topic of the essay. The thesis statement outlines some or all of the main points to be discussed but does not name the topic. The thesis statement does not name the topic AND does not preview what will be discussed. See above
Support of the thesis Support information is related to and supportive of the topic/subject. Support information has minor weaknesses in relatedness to and/or support of the topic/subject. Support information has major weaknesses in relatedness to and/or support of the topic/subject. An attempt has been made to add support information, but it was unrelated or confusing. See above
Evidence & Examples All of the evidence and examples are specific, relevant, and explanations are given that show how each support the thesis and support for the thesis. Most of the evidence and examples are specific, relevant and explanations are given that show how each support the thesis and support for the thesis. At least one of the pieces of evidence and examples is relevant and has an explanation that show how each support the thesis and support for the thesis. Evidence and examples are NOT relevant and/or are not explained in a way that add to the support of the thesis. See above
Elaboration Elaboration consists of specific, developed details. Elaboration consists of some specific details. Elaboration consists of general and/or undeveloped details, which may be presented in a list-like fashion. Elaboration is sparse; almost no details. See above
Sequencing Arguments and support are provided in a logical order that makes it easy and interesting to follow the author's train of thought. Arguments and support are provided in a fairly logical order that makes it reasonably easy to follow the author's train of thought. A few of the support details or arguments are not in an expected or logical order, distracting the reader and making the essay seem a little confusing. Many of the support details or arguments are not in an expected or logical order, distracting the reader and making the essay seem very confusing. See above
Writing Conventions (worth 80 points)
16 - Above Standards 12 - Meets Standards 8 - Approaching Standards 4 - Below Standards 0 or No Score
Transitions A variety of thoughtful transitions are used. They clearly show how ideas are connected. Transitions show how ideas are connected, but there is little variety. Some transitions work well, but some connections between ideas are fuzzy. The transitions between ideas are unclear OR nonexistant. See above
Citation Style The specified citation style has been exercised with no errors throughout the entire paper. Includes all relevant components of the given citation style (e.g. - cover page, bibliography/works cited, etc.) The specified citation style has been exercised with only 1 or 2 errors throughout the entire paper. Includes all relevant components of the given citation style (e.g. - cover page, bibliography/works cited, etc.) The specified citation style has been exercised with only 3 or 4 errors throughout the entire paper. Includes all relevant components of the given citation style (e.g. - cover page, bibliography/works cited, etc.) The specified citation style has been attempted but the paper contains 4 or more errors in its execution or is missing a major element of the given citation style. See above
Sentence Fluency Demonstrates skillful sentence fluency (varies length, good flow rhythm, and varied structure). Demonstrates reasonable sentence fluency. Demonstrates minimal sentence fluency. Sentence fluency is lacking. See above
Grammar & Spelling Author makes no errors in grammar or spelling that distract the reader from the content. Author makes 1-2 errors in grammar or spelling that distract the reader from the content. Author makes 3-4 errors in grammar or spelling that distract the reader from the content. Author makes more than 4 errors in grammar or spelling that distract the reader from the content. See above
Capitalization & Punctuation Author makes no errors in capitalization or punctuation, so the essay is exceptionally easy to read. Author makes 1-2 errors in capitalization or punctuation, but the essay is still easy to read. Author makes a few errors in capitalization and/or punctuation that catch the reader's attention and interrupt the flow. Author makes several errors in capitalization and/or punctuation that catch the reader's attention and interrupt the flow. See above