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Paper Title: ECON 102 essay

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Application of Economic Analysis: Needs Improvement

The definition of the term full employment is incorrect.

The student draws the wrong conclusion from her comparison of the actual and natural rates of unemployment.

The student identifies the reasons for the changes in the natural rate of unemployment from 2007 to 2012

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Whether or not full

employment has been

reached is based on the

relationship between

actual and natural unemployment.

Consider reexamining these

definitions of natural and

actual unemployment.

Further, examine the

statistics regarding their

current state.

Is the issue that they are

unwilling to work or that they

are unqualified for the jobs

that are available even if they

did want them?

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If the fixed rate were a very

high one, would it matter

that it was fixed? Why

might an employer be

unwilling to hire a qualified

and willing worker?

From where did these stats

come? What do they have to

say about the economy's

proximity to full employment?

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