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ENG 215 – Appendix A: Peer Review Feedback Form 2

Appendix A: Peer Review Feedback Form 2
Reviewer’s Name:	Date:2-26-2017 __
Writer’s Assigned #: _
Course:_Eng215___	Section:__016-1172-001

Assignment 4: Persuasive Paper Part 2: Solution and Advantages

Peer reviews should provide feedback to a peer on the criteria expected in the paper. Follow these instructions:

1) Receive a classmate’s paper from your professor (in class if on-ground; by e-mail if online).

2) Copy the Peer Review Feedback Form from the Appendix.

3) Comment on all criteria, noting strengths and / or areas for improvement on the feedback form.

4) Provide completed Peer Review Feedback Form and classmate’s paper to your professor.

Note: On-ground students should submit the feedback form and paper to the professor during the class meeting in which the paper is reviewed; online students should submit the feedback form and paper to the professor via the Assignment Tab in the course shell.

Criteria	+ Strengths	Comments < Areas for Improvement
Part 1
1. Revise, using feedback from the professor and classmates, your Persuasive Paper Part I - A Problem Exists.
Part 2
2. Included a defensible, relevant thesis statement clearly in the first paragraph.		The thesis statement is not clearly shown in the 1st paragraph.
3. Explain a detailed, viable solution that supports your thesis. This should be one or two (1-2) paragraphs.	The first and second paragraph are good supports to your thesis. Good history.
4. State, explain, and support the first advantage (economic, social, political, environmental, social, equitable, ethical/moral, etc.) to your solution. This should be one or two (1-2) paragraphs.	The advantages are state clearly for an moral solution.
5. State, explain, and support the second advantage (economic, social, political, environmental, social, equitable, ethical/moral, etc.) to your solution. This should be one or two (1-2) paragraphs.	The advantages are stated clearly for an ethical solution.
6. State, explain, and support the third (and fourth if desired) advantage (economic, social, political, environment, social, equitable, ethical/moral, etc.) to your solution. This should be one or two (1-2) paragraphs.		Could elaborate more.
7. Use effective transitional words, phrases, and sentences.		Could better transition from paragraph to paragraph
8. Provide a concluding paragraph /transitional paragraph that summarizes the proposed solution and its advantages.	Conclusion was well structured
9. Develop a coherently structured paper with an introduction, body, and conclusion.	Paper was structured very well	Can develop a better introduction
10. Use one or more rhetorical strategies (ethos, logos, pathos) to explain advantages.
11. Support advantage claims with at least three (3) additional quality relevant references. Use at least six (6) total for Parts 1 & 2.	Use the proper amount of references.
12. Other