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ENG 215 – Appendix A: Peer Review Feedback Form 1

Appendix A: Peer Review Feedback Form 1
Reviewer’s Name:	Date: 2/12/2017__
Writer’s Assigned #: _
Course:ENG212	Section:__

Assignment 3: Persuasive Paper Part 1: A Problem Exists

Peer reviews should provide feedback to a peer on the criteria expected in the paper. Follow these instructions:

1) Receive a classmate’s paper from your professor (in class if on-ground; by e-mail if online).

2) Copy the Peer Review Feedback Form from the Appendix.

3) Comment on all criteria, noting strengths and / or areas for improvement on the feedback form.

4) Provide completed Peer Review Feedback Form and classmate’s paper to your professor.

Note: On-ground students should submit the feedback form and paper to the professor during the class meeting in which the paper is reviewed; online students should submit the feedback form and paper to the professor via the Assignment Tab in the course shell.

Criteria	+ Strengths	Comments < Areas for Improvement
1. Provide an appropriate title and an interesting opening paragraph to appeal to your stated audience (appeal with logic, ethics, or emotion).	Brings up important topics Clear direction of the paper	Add appealing title Proofread, some grammatical errors
2. Include a defensible, relevant thesis statement in the first paragraph. (With revised thesis statement.)	Last two sentences are defensible, relevant	Combine last two sentences into concise thesis statement
3. Describe the history and status of the issue and provide an overview of the problem(s) that need to be addressed. This should be one or two (1-2) paragraphs.	History is well thought out and presented well	Proofread. some confusing sentences and grammatical errors
4. Explain the first problem (economic, social, political, environmental, complexity, inequity, ethical/moral, etc.) and provide support for your claims. This should be one or two (1- 2) paragraphs.	Good explanation of the first problem	Combine the two paragraphs speaking about the first problem
5. Explain the second problem (economic, social, political, environmental, complexity, inequity, ethical/moral, etc.) and provide support for your claims. This should be one or two (1-2) paragraphs.	Good explanation of second problem and suitable solutions provided	Explain solution more
6. Explain the third problem (economic, social, political, environmental, complexity, inequity, ethical/moral, etc.) and provide support for your claims. This should be one or two (1-2) paragraphs.	Good examples provided for third problem	Slightly confusing points brought up, could use some editing
7. Use effective transitional words, phrases, and sentences throughout the paper.	Well done	Use of “however” and “hence” a lot in last couple of paragraphs
8. Provide a concluding paragraph that summarizes the stated problems and promises a solution.	Summarizes all points, and provides suitable solution	Few grammatical errors
9. Develop a coherently structured paper with an introduction, body, and conclusion	Well done	Could shorten the intro
10. Support claims with at least three (3) quality, relevant references. Use credible, academic sources available through Strayer University’s Resource Center.	Three references provided	Add one for each problem/solution
11. Other	Good points brought up	Extra proofreading is needed to erase confusion