Final Paper---Pollution Prevention

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The Week 3 Assignment required you to produce an outline of your final project.  You covered most aspects of the assignment.  Be sure to see my comments in your paper and in the rubric.  Please let me know if you have any questions! 

(0.25 / 0.25) Outlines an Introduction that Includes a Thesis Sentence

Distinguished - Expertly outlines the topic and includes a well defined thesis sentence.

The outline of your introduction was clear and engaging. Your thesis sentence clearly indicates your position and the direction of the paper.

(0.88 / 1) Outlines a Plan to Prevent Solid Waste Production

Proficient - Adequately outlines a plan to prevent solid waste production. Some minor details are missing.

Your plan for preventing solid waste needed additional details. What are the advantages and disadvantages of implementing your plan?

(0.76 / 1) Outlines a Waste Management Plan

Basic - Minimally outlines a waste management plan; some relevant details were omitted.

Your waste management plan needed more detail. How would you manage waste that cannot be prevented?

(0.88 / 1) Outlines a Plan to Prevent Excess Wastewater

Proficient - Adequately outlines a plan to prevent excess wastewater; some minor details were omitted.

Your plan to prevent excess wastewater needed much more information. You needed to use some scholarly resources to help you develop a detailed plan.

(0.88 / 1) Outlines a Wastewater Management Plan

Proficient - Adequately outlines a wastewater management plan. Some minor details are missing.

Your plan for wastewater management needed much more detail. What are the key methods currently used for managing wastewater? You needed to use this information to help formulate a plan.

(0.64 / 1) Outlines a Land Management Plan that Limits Destruction of Forests and Wildlife

Below Expectations - Attempts to outline a land management plan that limits destruction of forests and wildlife. Some significant details were omitted.

Your land use management plan was satisfactory. You needed to also address how you would limit deforestation. How can human expansion continue with minimal disruption to forests?

Your land use management plan was satisfactory. You needed to also address how you would limit destruction of wildlife. How can human expansion continue with minimal disruption to wildlife?

(0 / 1) Outlines the Economic and Political Feasibility of the Plans and Presents Some Ideas to Overcome any Proposed Barriers

Non-Performance - The outline of the economic and political feasibility of your plans and discussion of ideas to overcome proposed barriers was omitted.

(0 / 0.25) Outlines a Conclusion that Sums up the Proposed Plan

Non-Performance - A conclusion that outlines and sums up your proposed plan was omitted.

(0.64 / 1) Written Communication: Control of Syntax and Mechanics

Below Expectations - Fails to display basic comprehension of syntax or mechanics, such as spelling and grammar. Written work contains major errors, which distract the reader.

The paper contains a number of mechanical errors that makes it difficult for the reader to understand the writer's intent and analysis.

(0.22 / 0.25) APA Formatting

Proficient - Exhibits APA formatting throughout the paper. However, layout contains a few minor errors.

(0.25 / 0.25) Page Requirement

Distinguished - The paper meets the specific page requirement stipulated in the assignment description.

(2 / 2) Source Requirement

Distinguished - Uses more than the required number of scholarly sources, providing compelling evidence to support ideas. All sources on the reference page are used and cited correctly within the body of the assignment.

Overall Score: 7.4 / 10