Introduction:
A. Context: The issue is that many lives are going to change for the worst, many students and undocumented will face many challenges to adjust their lives.
B. Establish: [Set the tone of the paper. Make clear both sides of the topic]
C. Thesis: The purpose of my argument is to show how people’s lives are at stake, many dreams would be demolished, and many families would be torn apart.
First Body Paragraph:
A. Transition: International students might see their dream of having a college degree vanquished, as an international student myself, I can relate to these people.
B. Establish: Donald Trump’s fear of radical Islam had him suggest a ban on all Muslims. I believe his choice is illogical and that he is generalizing all Muslims of being a threat to the nation. http://www.cnn.com/2015/12/07/politics/donald-trump-muslim-ban-immigration/index.html
a. Evidence: "I think that we should definitely disallow any Muslims from coming in. Any of them. The reason is simple: we can't identify what their attitude is," ("I think that we should definitely disallow any Muslims from coming in. Any of them. The reason is simple: we can't identify what their attitude is,").
b. Objection: The CNN news article, I will explain how not all Muslims are a threat.
C. Preface: Generalizing all Muslims to be evil is not a fair thing. Taking Muslims student dream is an awful thing and it should be carefully thought of when taking this kind of choice.
Second Body Paragraph:
A. Transition: Undocumented immigrants are at risk of losing their homes as well as their loved ones.
B. Establish: Because of the chance of immigration laws to change, undocumented immigrant are frightened that they one day will be torn apart from their family.
a. Evidence: "There's no path to legalization unless they leave the country," CNN.
b. Objection: After their deportation, to be able to obtain the American citizenship, they would have to wait for a significant amount of time until they are approved.
C. Preface: Tearing apart homes is devastating to the undocumented immigrants, there could be another way that does not involve separating families.
Third Body Paragraph:
A. Transition: The road to the American citizenship is long and time consuming.
B. Establish: To be able to become an American citizen, a person must go through a long process until they are approved.
a. Evidence: The Hannah Arendt book
b. Objection: The process is very long and it is time consuming, and those applying are kept separated from their loved ones.
C. Preface: Finally, immigration process takes a considerable amount of time, and I think that it could be reduced
Conclusion:
Summarize: This essay talks about on how the immigration system will change, and how it might impact the lives of international student and undocumented immigrants. As an international student, I fear that someday I might get deported and not to be able to continue with my studies.
International students are at risk of deportation after the election of Donald Trump for president. The impact on this situation is critical, because many students will lose their chance of getting a college degree, and if they return back to their homes, they might face some tough challenges to get into college.
The other party who are going to suffer from this change are the undocumented immigrants, they would be torn apart from their loved ones, and it will also make their lives very difficult for they will have to start building their future from the beginning.
A. Questioning/Action: Should Muslims be banned from entering the United States? Even those not guilty of what the radical group have done? And is it really so easy to rip apart families and destroying homes? Think about it.
` Work Cite
Diamond, Jeremy. “Donald Trump: Ban all Muslim travel to U.S.”. CNN, politics, Dec 8, 2015. http://www.cnn.com/2015/12/07/politics/donald-trump-muslim-ban-immigration/index.html
Schleifer, Theodore. “Trump: No legal status for undocumented immigrants”. CNN, politics, Aug 26, 2016. http://www.cnn.com/2016/08/25/politics/trump-no-legal-status-for-undocumented-immigrants/index.html
Whitfield, Stephen. “Hana Aredent and the banality of evil”. Jstore. Vol.no. 11-12, society for history education, Aug, 1981, Jstore.org.