project description
Project Description
Detailed description of the problem. Clear to reader why problem is significant and how it has been solved in the past. Answers (1) problem being solved, (2) why the solution is needed (3) who will use it, (4) discussed existing design solutions for your problem So, that problem is that, most of the new cars don’t come with a spare tire + jack and I’m trying to design a mobility kit(spare tire,jack and lug wrench) to solve the problem! Why problem is significant and how it has been solved in the past? Take a look at what I have done to understand what’s going on. I will put the comments when I wrote this to avoid them!! use the resources that I put at the end of my paper! And any other resources! I want a technical paper please! These are the comments I got: - FIRST PARAGRAPH IS THE PROBLEM. SECOND WHY IS A SOLUTION NEEDED. THIRD IS POSSIBLE SOLUTIONS.
- YOU MUST THINK OF THIS PAPER AS IF SOMEONE WHO KNOWS NOTHING IS READING THIS. EXPLAIN IN DEPTH. MORE INFORMATION IS BETTER THAN NO INFORMATION.
- Fix the way of introducing the project description. This is not an English essay. It's a technical paper
- This is not an essay - this is a technical paper. Define the PROBLEM in a TECHNICAL FORMAT. LOGICAL AND PROPER.
- Before mentioning the solution, explain why the problem is significant.Give data on the percentage of cars that get stuck on the roads annually. You have this, so talk about it before the solution.
-WHAT IS THE DESIGN PROBLEM. WHAT SOLUTION IS NEEDED. WHO WILL USE THIS SOLUTION.
- NO! THIS IS NOT PROPER FORMAT FOR A TECHNICAL PAPER. USE IN A QUOTE THAT COULD BE SHORTENED ONLY.
- what do you mean by long wait?? an hour? 30 minutes? 2 hours? could you be a little more specific? please
- you have only mention AAA, you have not mention any other type of road side assistance service. Could you please add more about other services?
- we are doing third person only. Not "you" that's second person, tried to write this on another way. Also, the punctuation at the of the sentence, you shouldn't use "!".
- WHAT OTHER ROAD SIDE ASSISTANT SERVICES AS WELL. ONE SOURCE IS NOT ENOUGH.
Project Description
What’s worse than a flat tire? The sinking realization that you have no way to fix it. That’s the situation more American motorists may find themselves in as 36 percent of 2015 models are sold without a spare tire or jack. (1) The objective of this report is to design a tire mobility kit (TMK) which is a combination of a spare tire, automatic jack and a lug wrench.
In the United States, approximately 7 tire punctures occur every second, resulting in 220 million flat tires per year. Also, statistics show that every driver will experience on average up to 5 flat tires in their life time. (3) So the likelihood of running into such a roadside emergency is very high. In the past, approximately 70% of the old model cars come with a spare tire and a jack, but that number decreased ….
based on the consumer-affairs website there 200+ reviews from customers with bad experiences from AAA ranging from long wait time to the representatives not showing at all. One of the customers on the website, Caren of Mcmurray, who had been a member for 19 years said ”I called for a change of tire. After 90 minutes called back. Nobody came. They assured me 40 minutes that someone would be there. I am sitting here for close to 3 hours.” (4) In case of a flat tire, no spare tire and no cellphone signal to call AAA, how would you handle a situation whereby the motorist has a flat tire with no spare tire or cellphone signal in the location! By looking at the graph below the dead zones across the country can be found. The green color means the signal is strong, the red means there is a weak signal and the area with no color means no data collected. (7)
Coverage maps showing ATT, SPRINT, T-MOBILE AND VERIZON
There are other products in the market as shown in the table below,
About 12 percent of new vehicles come with run-flat tires. Vehicles equipped with "run flat" tires "have no spare at all." These tires are meant to be driven after puncture for 50 miles at speeds under 50 mph and allow a driver to get to a safe place. (9) However, their prices are much expensive than standard tires and many run-flat tires aren't repairable. Tire repair kits consisting of an air compressor and an integrated bottle of a thick, viscous sealant.
They take up the least amount of space in a trunk. However, it can't be used to fix about 15 percent of punctures.(5) Also, if the tire separated from the wheel or the puncture is on the sidewall and is larger than a quarter of an inch, this kit is useless. 1) http://blog.caranddriver.com/disappearing-donuts-one-third-of-new-cars-dont-come-with-a-spare-tire/ 2) http://www.doityourself.com/stry/liquid-tire-repair--pros--cons 3) http://www.activetools.com/education-center/the-science-behind-our-compressors 4) https://www.consumeraffairs.com/automotive/aaa.html 5) https://www.edmunds.com/car-buying/the-disappearing-spare-tire.html 6) http://www.safebee.com/travel/what-do-if-new-car-doest-have-spare-tire 7) https://opensignal.com/networks/usa/sprint-coverage/ 8) http://abcnews.go.com/US/gma-investigates-cars-sold-spare-tires/story?id=36435661 9) http://www.ocala.com/news/20151115/is-your-car-newer-dont-assume-it-has-a-spare