Kim Woods

October 5, 2016 Comment by Eric: date format is incorrect

To: Mr.Alexander Spelling

4657 N. Romeo Road

Fullerton, CA 92831 Comment by Eric: this should be on a separate line

Dear Mr. Spelling:

Subject: Welcome to Marriott Hotels

We would like to welcome you as a valuable new member to be part of our Marriott Hotels family as well as choosing us as a hotel to provide you with excellent service. As a welcome to our newly signed member, we would like to offer you a free night stay at any category 1 through 5 Marriott Hotels. Comment by Eric: Welcome Alexander instead of "all" Comment by Eric: this sections sounds odd Comment by Eric: spacing should be single and not double

Marriott Hotels provide great benefits to their valuable members to keep our membership which keep our membership good for our members. We provide 48-hour guaranteed room availability for our members which who make it easy to them in the seasons to find a room and reserve it without any inconvenience. We understand that our members cannot checkout sometimes early and because of that we have provided to our valuable customer's late checkout at 4.:00 pm which let them to take their time and do not be in rush. Comment by Eric: this sentence needs re-work

Our value has kept because of your choice. Without your respectful comments, we would not be grown. We hope you enjoy with your stays and give us your valuable feedback. We always look for your comments, and we wish you enjoy with your stays and our services in Marriott Hotels. We have 24/7 customer service to serve you at anytime Comment by Eric: this sounds odd Comment by Eric: passive voice Comment by Eric: need punctuation, need a period Comment by Eric: this paragraph needs re-work

Sincerely,

Marriott Hotels

Vice President of Human Resources

Ahmed Husain Comment by Eric: your name should be above the job title