**KIM WOODS** Graduate-Level Writing Analysis and Development Plan

Graded Nov 07, 2016, 3:45 AM

Overall, you earned all rubric points with exception to the flow of the paper. For example, when you are transitioning consider how you are connecting the minor parts of the paper together throughout. First, take a look at what your previous paragraph is stating. Then, find a way to connect the contents either at the end of the paragraph or at the beginning of the next paragraph. The following areas are the most common APA mistakes made by the class. Please review these to make sure you are correctly formatting these common areas as I do not deduct APA formatting point on the first assignment: Be sure to double space your paper; the reference page needs to be on a new page. • your title page should have - Running head: LIKE THIS • level 1 and 2 headings should be in bold font • your title should be on the first line of the first written page • the contents on the center of the page should include the title, your name, and university name only all centered on the page • on each line your references page should be double spaced with the heading References • the references page should have italicized information for each reference • on the web references your title is italicized • everything should be double spaced on the reference page and throughout the paper. • on the references page – the first line of the reference is flush left and the following lines are indented Best Regards, Dr. J

WEEK 2 Research Article Analysis

Graded Nov 14, 2016, 7:50 AM

You earned full credit on the article review assignment. Specifically, you identified all of the required areas by identifying the main components of the article, discussed reliability and validity, as well as a summary.

WEEK 4 Psychology Research Paper

Graded Nov 28, 2016, 8:35 AM

Your paper looked great. The APA format was on target and I noted that you applied the feedback from the last paper. I particular found your transitions from one paragraph to the next on target. Although this paper was not heavy on analytical thought processes you will have to consider this as you move through the program. So, I want to provide you some insight with this area. When reading through articles, consider what the author is missing within the text of the work. Then, write about this piece as you are moving through the paper. You might add this as a paragraph at the end with a heading such as - moving forward or next steps.