Communication
Graphics Homework: Direct Strategy Message + Graphic Value: 4 points Other Writing Grade
Memo – one page – (see header example on pp.174-175)*
Write a direct response message
Create a chart
Graphics homework: memo format
TO: Dr. Valerie Creelman
FROM: Your name
DATE: October 7, 2016
SUBJECT: Informative subject line
[no greeting]
OPENING
BODY= introduction to graphic + meaningful observation + complete graphic
CLOSING
[no complimentary close or signature block]
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Graphics homework: Due Friday, October 7, 9:00 a.m. on Turnitin.
Select data from the table below to create a graphic (pie, bar, or line chart).
Place the graphic and a relevant, meaningful observation about the data in the body of a 3-part direct response memo.
This data comes from a Survey of Emergency Preparedness and Resilience in Canada done in 2014.
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| Households with battery-operated or wind-up radio | Households with a back-up generator | |
| Canada | 58% | 23% |
| Nova Scotia | 77% | 36% |
Correct Number Usage G&S p. 19
Dates September 19, 2016
September 19th, 2016
Money $57 not $57.00
Numbers use words for one to ten
use numerals for 11 upwards
Use words when beginning a sentence:
Twenty percent of customers reported…
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A good graphic tells a complete story
introduces and labels chart by number
provides meaningful interpretation of the graphic (see p. 345)
complete title
labeled axes (if necessary)
clear legend (if necessary)
source note
Ch. 9, Slide 6
Direct Response Opening, p. 205
Identify what message is and why reader received it.
Acknowledge what was requested.
Examples:
As you requested,…
Here is…
At your request, …
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Ch. 9, Slide 7
Body
One sentence introducing your chart by number and telling your reader what to see. Make a meaningful observation about it.
Your completely labeled and visually attractive chart.
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Ch. 9, Slide 8
Direct Response Closing, p. 206
Refer to the information provided.
Provide contact information.
Build goodwill.
Avoid ending with wordy, clichéd closes like
Please feel free..
Please don’t hesitate to contact me….
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