communication

Assignment 2 by Mohammed Aldawood

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T IME SUBMIT T ED 21- MAY- 2015 12:52PM

SUBMISSION ID 54 24 24 008

WORD COUNT 267

CHARACT ER COUNT 1151

A2.PDF (7 7 .67 K)

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7.5/10

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FINAL GRADE

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Assignment 2 GRADEMARK REPORT

GENERAL COMMENTS

Instructor

PAGE 1

Correct strategy; detailed analysis.

Comment 1 Revisio n: Co nversely, the average ho urly wages o f part time... decreased... (eliminates the wo rdiness)

spelling error/ typo

spelling error/ typo

spelling error/ typo

What do you mean?

Meaningf ul introduction to graphic.

Complete graphic Yo ur graphic has all the co mpo nents: label, co mplete title, axes labels, legend, and so urce.

Comment 2 Add emplo yees f o r clarity (who ).

Text Comment. go o d clo sing

Writing needs some revision. I've highlighted examples.

Text Comment. 7 .5/10