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THIS IS THE RESPONSES FROM THE TEACHER THAT SHOULD BE LOOKED AT AND FIXED!!!!!

Event 4: 1945 to the present

Event:

The enactment of the Civil Rights Act.

When: when did, the event happen? Did it happen on a specific date? During a specific decade?

This event took place on July 2nd, 1964.

Where: Where did the event happen? In a specific city, state, or region of the country?

Throughout the country?

This event took place throughout the country.

Who: Who were the main people involved in the event? What specific group of people was

involved? Are there specific individuals associated with this event?

African Americans were the main focus of this event.

Why: What events or issues contributed to this event happening?

Numerous protests by the African American Community. Attacks on the African American

community during their protests including the Birmingham Campaigns where the police dogs

attacked them. These protests were all against segregation of the community.

How: How is this event historically significant?

The act led to equal voting rights requirements as well as stopped discrimination based on race,

color, gender, religion and national origin.

TEACHERS REPONSE TO THIS EVENT:

You can use this or you could

(in keeping with your other

sources look at legislation

specifically on immigrants in

the 1960s or more recent

I WOULD PREFER IF YOU WOULD PLEASE FIND A DIFFERENT EVENT THAT FITS INTO THE TIME LINE.

APA Citation for Primary Source 1:

_ Civil Rights Bill Passed, 73-27; Johnson Urges All To Comply; Dirksen Berates Goldwater.

(2016). Nytimes.com. Retrieved 13 October 2016, from

http://www.nytimes.com/learning/general/onthisday/big/0619.html

TEACHERS RESPONSE TO THIS PRIMARY RESOURCE:

This is a useful source but it

is not a primary source as it

was not written in 1960s ... a

primary source has to be

written at the time of the

event it is discussing. There

are a lot of primary source on

civil rights. A secondary

sources needs to be a journal

or book see again the

handout for this.

YOU NEED TO FIND ANOTHER PRIMARY SOURCE FOR THIS PAPER PLEASE!!!!

PLEASE USE THIS TO HELP IDENTIFY A PRIMARY SOURCE: http://vizedhtmlcontent.next.ecollege.com/pub/content/5f23b9c2-aec5-4356-ad60-77b27d5887c3/HIS206.Primary_Sources_handout.pdf

Thesis:

Looking at immigrants’ history in the U.S., there are limited opportunities to the Chinese

immigrants yet their contribution to the development of the United States was significant.

TEACHERS RESPONSE TO THESIS STATEMENT:

You have a great start here

but keep in mind you thesis

needs to reflect the sources

(that is the evidence) that you

have found ... you might want

to work at this as you

progress with the paper.

PLEASE KEEP THIS IN MIND AS YOU WRITE THE PAPER!!!!!!!!