Written Informative Speech

Alberto Manrique

· His introduction to the story was good.

· His eye contact in the beginning was good.

· Towards the middle of the story he started looking in other directions than the camera

· Felt like he was nervous with his body movement.

· I had trouble following the story in the middle due to not understanding what he was saying.

· The conclusion was not very strong

· I do have to applaud you on your efforts, when English isn’t your first language, it can be hard to communicate. Keep up the hard work. Your English will improve.

Kendall Nash

· His introduction was good.

· His eye contact throughout was pretty good.

· I felt the struggle he went through growing up and how it helped him build confidence.

· He portrayed himself as a strong and independent individual.

· His accent was pleasant to listen to.

· Kendall was to the point in his story.

· His closing was good.