attention tutoedouglas

Overview of my writing

This is an outline of my overview of my essay which I already written. can you please adjust or rewrite it so he can sounds somewhat better. and please use my same format.. thanks.

First of all, I choose to write about The signal a short story by Vsevolod Garshin because the story shows how hard work, determination, and perseverance will pay off in the long run. This story also shows motivation for the readers and others who struggle to succeed. When I thought about writing this paper I have also have to think about how my story can help my readers understand the story in a different way.

Anyhow, after reading and familiarized myself with the story I to try to develop a strong thesis statement and ensure organizing is clear and consistent. My readers should be able to follow an order of when, where, or what time. I have to think about strong thesis statement that I can use to support my story since the thesis is the most important part of the story which tells what the paper is all about and also it helps to introduce to the readers what is going to be discussed.

outline--Next thing I choose to formulate my outline which includes brainstorming and gathering the evidence. With this, I was able to jot down ideas that will incorporate into my paper.

Diction and tone- I have to choose my words carefully when it comes to the diction and tone. This is where the mood of the paper is felt. The tone of the words should fit the purpose or the reason the writer is writing. Is it a sad or happy mood. In this case, I would say this story is full of determination. because although the character was crippled with rheumatism, he never let it get him down and keep on working.

Mechanic- This is where my grammar skills displayed. Although there is software on my computer which masters this section, I have to still ensure the right words were in sitting in the right sentence . The mechanics show strong grammar skills and gives the readers a very clear idea and an overall understanding of the story.

Lastly, I choose to proofread my essay, this helps me to realized how well my paragraphs are well written, supported and whether I have documented everything