English 122 Assisgnment redo help

Finally, in the 3-2 Writing Plan assignment, your score is low because there simply was not enough detail, reflection, or information included in your replies. This assignment basically serves as an outline for your first draft, so the more information you put down about how you want to approach the ideas, the better off you'll be in Module 5

1. Claim – is your claim a clear depiction of what you want to communicate about your interpretation of the original article? Does it specifically mention what you want to say about the original author's message, or whether you disagree or agree with their ideas?

2. Key points – are these key points distinct enough from one another that readers won't confuse them as they read through your analysis? Will your key points help support and illustrate your claim?

3. Evidence – since an analysis calls on you, the writer of the analysis, to draw exclusively from the original material, think about what sentences or ideas from the article are most poignant, and what ties in most effectively with your key points. Then think about where in your discussions of the main points the evidence would do the most work. For example, if you have what you feel is a strong quote that really represents the point you're making, consider placing that piece of evidence at the end of your discussion to help drive home the ideas for readers.

4. Audience – think about what groups or demographics are going to find your analysis useful, interesting, or relevant to themselves. Getting specific about your audience helps you pick out how they might question or oppose your ideas. Knowing what questions and objections to address means you'll be able to write a more thorough, cohesive analysis that leaves readers both informed and satisfied/persuaded.

5. Feedback and revision – it's never too early to think about how you approach incorporating feedback or how you plan to go about revising. Thinking of both as a process helps you identify the tools and skills that work best for you to polish and refine your essay. Hone in on what works for you and continue to use and rely on it all as your revision process.

     Definitely use your rough blueprint as a springboard for your first drafts, but don't rely on it solely. Always re-read the article and spend some time developing each of those bones to be more thorough and meaningful.