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Hi Darlene,
You are off to a good start here! There is always a bit of a learning curve when acquiring the skills and knowledge to do a literary analysis. The "Eight Steps to Writing a Literary Analysis" guide is immensely helpful, and I would suggest using the provided checklist to make sure you are on the right track. For formatting issues, I would suggest looking at the way sample APA papers are set up on the Purdue Owl website: https://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/560/01
The Writing Center should also be able to help you figure out if you are meeting expectations for these written assignments.
Best wishes as you move on to the next steps!
(1.76 / 2) Analyze Literary Work(s) From the Approved List of Prompts
Proficient - Provides a mostly clear and detailed analysis of literary work(s) from the approved list of prompts. Analysis relates to the thesis while avoiding plot summary and personal reflection. The three key points from the proposal are developed and support the analysis. Minor details are slightly underdeveloped.
(2 / 2) Thesis Statement
Distinguished - Thoroughly developed thesis statement provides a clear purpose and direction to the essay.
(2.64 / 3) Body Paragraphs and Topic Sentences
Proficient - The body paragraphs contain topic sentences that somewhat relate to the thesis. Minor details are unclear.
(1.76 / 2) Conclusion
Proficient - The conclusion reaffirms the thesis statement and summarizes the direction and purpose of the essay. The conclusion is somewhat underdeveloped.
(1.52 / 2) Apply Literary Elements and Other Course Concepts
Basic - Partially applies literary techniques and other course concepts to the chosen primary source(s) to present an interpretation of the work(s). Relevant details are underdeveloped.
(0 / 2) Incorporation of Research
Non-Performance - The incorporation of research is either nonexistent or lacks the components described in the assignment instructions.
(0.44 / 0.5) Written Communication: Control of Syntax and Mechanics
Proficient - Displays comprehension and organization of syntax and mechanics, such as spelling and grammar. Written work contains only a few minor errors and is mostly easy to understand.
(0.44 / 0.5) Written Communication: APA Formatting
Proficient - Exhibits APA formatting throughout the paper. However, layout contains a few minor errors.
(0.5 / 0.5) Written Communication: Page Requirement
Distinguished - The length of the paper is equivalent to the required number of correctly formatted pages.
(0.44 / 0.5) Written Communication: Resource Requirement
Proficient - Uses the required number of scholarly sources to support ideas. All sources on the reference page are used and cited correctly within the body of the assignment.
Overall Score: 11.5 / 15
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