Expository Essay That Blends
Tootie
english_instructor_feedback_unit_3-4.docxInstructor Feedback for units 3 and 4
Unit 3 - Individual Project
Hi Student
Thanks for submitting your Unit 3 Individual Project – Part I of III. I appreciate the time you put into this assignment. The outline assignment is important to master as it’s a good way to organize thoughts and writing strategies. Please note where your assignment earned points or had points deducted.
- Demonstrates mastery of rhetorical mode and uses it to deliver appropriate, detailed, and pertinent content structured in a logical pattern. Reflects ability to compose using invention and scheme strategies. Mastery of thesis statement, supporting topics, and outline skills present. (65 points)
- Demonstrates critical analysis of topic with the use of relevant, insightful, and logical subpoints. (50 points)
- Follows format and presentation requirements listed for the assignment. Demonstrates effective college-level syntax, word choice, correct grammar, and mechanics. (10 points)
Let me know if you have any questions or concerns. Remember, you can always review the Unit 3 Live Chat as was as the Unit 1 & 2 Intellipath assignments. All three learning resources were key components of this assignment. Again, thank you for the submission and all your hard work!
Unit 4 - Individual Project
Thank you for submitting the Unit 4 IP essay or part II. I enjoyed reading about the opposing point-of-view to your Unit 3 IP topic. I hoped it helped further your understanding of the writing process and what it takes to become an observant writer. Below is the grading criterion for this assignment. Please note where your assignment earned points or had points deducted.
· Demonstrates mastery of rhetorical mode and uses it to deliver appropriate, detailed, and pertinent content structured in a logical pattern. Mastery of thesis statement, supporting topics, and draft writing skills present. (65 points)
· Demonstrates critical analysis of topic with the use of relevant, insightful, and logical subpoints. (50 points)
· Follows APA 6th edition format and presentation requirements as listed for the assignment. Demonstrates effective college-level syntax, word choice, correct grammar, and mechanics. (5 points)
ADD A RUNNING HEADER (-5)
If you need some more help understanding the assignment, try re-reading the Chapter 4 "Revising for Improvement, Section II: Grammar Handbook - Part 5: Common Misused Words Section III: Style Guide "APA Style - Formatting a Paper”. You can also review the Unit 4 Live Chat. Let me know if you have any questions or concerns. Again, thank you for the submission and all your hard work!
