Justification Report Part 2

Justification Report- Part 1

Roseline Adebayo

ENG 315- Professional Communications

Dr. Mary Rose Kasraie

July 24, 2016

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Problem Statement

Customer taste and preferences are subject to change, and it changes frequently; attending and

adjusting to such changes can takes time due to the communication channels involve in the

process. Customers are sensitive and require urgent responses to their issues or we risk losing

them to our competing firms. There are many varieties in today’s market, and customer needs

changes frequently. This changes are due to different changes in the market brought about by

many factors, like technology and different products and services.

Overview of Alternatives

The idea I would like to put across is to come up with personalized online services to our

esteemed customers, which will improve the provision of services to them all. Currently,

technology has advanced such that we can do business online regardless of where the business

and customer are located (Kim, 2009). For us to reach many customers in a short time, then we

need to implement online services where we can reach our customers and deliver their products

with ease. The other possible solution is employed qualified researchers who will study the

market trends and come up with future predictions of how the market will behave. The prediction

will be useful in strategic planning as the business will have a clue of how the market will

behave and this will help in attending to changes in the market as we provide best services to our

customers.

Criteria

 Cost – the two alternatives are good, but the cost implementation differs. Online service

is cheaper in implementation as compared to hiring many qualified researchers who will

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In the overview of alternatives, describe Alternative A and Alternative B; they must be clearly listed and understood. Please review the model assignment and the instructions for putting together the alternatives.

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demand monthly pay. Once the online service is implemented it won’t require monthly

attention other than the maintenance.

 Efficiency – regarding efficiency, online service is more efficient as compared to

researchers. Researchers have to go to the field to gather information than analysis before

delivering the final recommendations (Rhee, 2010). This is opposed to online service

which can generate reports on daily basis.

 Desirability – online service is more desirable since it fits the current market technology

and brings the efficiency that the business desires most.

 Time – once the online service implemented, it immediately goes to use, so the

implementation is fast as compared to people who are employed to work as they need

coordination and monitoring.

 Practicality – it goes without saying that online service is more practical as compared to

researchers. Having researchers is like continuing with the manual way where people use

to attend to customers and online services is like an upgrade (Nissley, 2010).

Methods

The researcher need to analysis the current market and different strategies that our competitors

are currently using (JIN, 2009). The best method to use is to go to a few customers and ask for

their views and then try to implement the best choice. The researcher should conduct the test

such that the customers are given advantages and disadvantages of each alternative so they can

choose wisely. The customers involved should be a good representation of our entire customer.

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I can now see what you are trying to do, Roselind; redo a clear problem statement and list two alternative solutions. Then, remove the evaluation from the criteria and simply describe the criteria.

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This section is to be used to describe how you will find the source material you need to support your analysis of the alternative solutions using the criteria.

Reference:

JIN, B. L. (2009). A Sunmary on the Reseach Method for Agents Cooperation [J]. Computer Knowledge

and Technology.

Kim, S. S. (2009). Out of dedication or constraint? A dual model of post-adoption phenomena and its

empirical test in the context of online services. MIS quarterly.

Nissley, N. (2010). Arts-based learning at work: economic downturns, innovation upturns, and the

eminent practicality of arts in business. Journal of Business Strategy.

Rhee, S. H. (2010). Increasing the efficiency of business processes using a theory of constraints.

Information Systems Frontiers.