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So FAR so good just some more research on each key points to bring it up to minimum of 6-8 pages of content. Remember a minimum of one page per key points. You are on the right track and have some outstanding research. Excellent work on your rough draft as you are doing a good job so far. Just more research on all key points but you are on the right track to getting a really good grade. Please remember that you must follow the requirements and made any corrections that were needed. Your final paper should address the following key points:

(1) The Controversy: You have Identified the controversy and have gone into some detail (10/10)

(2) The Major Players: You have started to state who is involved and Why are they involved. I would have liked more on this part of your project as it is important to discuss who the players are on both sides of the Controversy (15/15)

(3) Important Facts: You did have them separate from side one stated the relevant facts concerning the issue. Make sure you try to separate fact from opinion. Try not to show your own bias. Properly use APA citations (15/15)

(4) Side One: You stated briefly what was the argument on one side and cite your sources (15/15).

(5) Side Two: Arguments; s You stated briefly what the argument was and cite your sources (15/15).

(6) Your Opinion and Rationale: You did give me anything here at all discussing the arguments and rationale. You did list or go on to discuss the arguments you would use to present to those who disagree with you but you need to go more into this (20/20).

(7) References: You did a great job on your references and they are sound science references as they are in Alphabetize order. Make sure there are sources representing both sides of the issue. You used a minimum of 6 sound science sources... (10/10). Make sure you give more detail on each key point