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Grammar Worksheets: Using Strong Verbs http://www.grammar-worksheets.com This worksheet confronts a writing problem that may go undetected. Although readers may not notice the

problem, it still affects how they perceive your writing.

Weaker: The philanthropist is careful to give only to organizations that have low administrative costs.

Stronger: The philanthropist gives only to organizations with low administrative costs. Do the sentences mean exactly the same thing? No. There is a subtle difference. The first sentence

underscores the care with which the philanthropist gives. However, unless you mean to emphasize this care, the second sentence conveys the message more strongly than the first. The second sentence is also shorter by four words. Shorter is usually better. Length matters sometimes, but sometimes it doesn’t. Weaker: William was late to the meeting.

Stronger: William arrived late to the meeting. These two sentences use the same number of words, six. However, note how the verb in the second

sentence, arrived, sounds more vigorous, describes the act of attending the meeting more clearly, than the verb in the first, was, which merely describes a state of being. The main culprits include the verbs “to be” and “to have.” These verbs may hide in the forms listed

below. Any time you use one of these verbs (Be, Is, Are, Was, Been, Being, Were, Has, Have, Having, Had) ask yourself if the sentence should be rewritten. To rewrite sentences using strong verbs: 1. Underline any use of Be, Is, Are, Was, Been, Being, Were,

Has, Have, Having, Had. 2. Look for a noun or adjective that you can convert to a strong verb. 3. Rewrite the sentence using that strong verb.

1. John is the manager of the produce department. 2. John is the manager of the produce department. (noun – predicate nominative)

3. John manages the produce department. The University of Houston provides a good worksheet on using strong verbs. Take a look.

http://prtl.uhcl.edu/portal/page/portal/WC/Files/Tipsheet%20Using%20Strong%20Verbs%20-%20A

Exercises: Rewrite each sentence to make the main verb stronger. 1. Janet Smith is the supervisor of the customer service department. ____________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________ 2. Walt Disney was the initiator of a mass movement in family entertainment. ____________________________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________________ 3. The whole house was stressed and angry with one another over my parents’ fighting over the bills.

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Grammar Worksheets: Using Strong Verbs 4. In the distance there is a giant eruption from the water, as a 100-pound sailfish jumps out.

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5. Jenny Millhouse is the owner of two gas stations in Florida City. ____________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________ 6. The sugar cane refinery is the employer that is the driving force for employment in south central Florida. ____________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________

7. The student who is responsible for conducting the survey and reporting the results to the school administration is James Archer.

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8. If a manager is thinking about changing a policy statement, she has the responsibility to inform both her immediate supervisor and her employees. ____________________________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________________ 9. The shipped product was different from the one that was advertised in the catalog. ____________________________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________________ 10. The Foster family has a fruit stand near Krome Avenue.

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11. After a questionable call at home plate, the manager had an argument with the umpire. ____________________________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________________ 12. Last week, the class had a discussion about Kate Chopin’s novel The Awakening. ____________________________________________________________________________________

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