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introduction

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Comment 1 Co me see me if yo u have questio ns abo ut my co mments.

Comment 2 Find a phrase o ther than "very impo rtant."

Comment 3 So me inf o rmatio n is go o d, but yo ur writing is wo rdy. Fo r example, yo ur last sentence co uld be:

T he research f o cuses o n ho w f iref ighters perf o rm rescue o peratio ns when f ires break o ut in

unf amiliar buildings. Read yo ur sentences alo ud and ask yo urself : what's really impo rtant- - and

then cho o se the best wo rds f o r tho se ideas.

Comment 4 T ry to co ndense this inf o rmatio n into 1 paragraph.

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Comment 5 Do es so me o f this inf o rmatio n need to be quo ted?

Comment 6 Where is the inf o rmatio n f ro m yo ur interview?

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Comment 7 I do n't recall seeing this so urce. Did yo u use it?

APA Double Space- APA requires do uble spacing thro ugho ut.

Comment 8 Review capitalizatio n o f jo urnals in APA.