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Running Head: FIREFIGHTS
Method
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In conducting this research, the researcher issued questionnaires to ten students so as to establish whether they well understood this profession and results were collected from all the ten students and analyzed. The purpose of choosing the questionnaire was because they are not only easy to administer but you can regulate the information that you want from the participants. Review the instructions for writing the Method section and on writing in passive voice. Change sentences to reflect passive voice—like this: Questionnaires were issued to ten students to establish how well they understood this profession. Provide the date and the way the surveys were administered (SurveyMonkey, mail, FB, handed out in class?).
Results
The answer is to how much the students thought firefighters earned per year was that six students believed that they earned between $60000-90000, three students said that it was between $35000 and $55000 whereas one student replied that it was between $20000 and $45000. Don’t feel like you always have to include the question when you report your results. Try something like—According to the survey, 66% of the students (6) believed firefighters earned between $60,000 and $90,000 per year while approximately 33% said . . . . Only 10% (1 student) chose the lowest amount of . . . .
The answer as to whether the students were aware of any risks and/or diseases that firefighters exposed themselves was that nine of the surveyed students saw that the job was stressful and that the firefighters risked getting burned while conducting the rescue missions whereas one student answered that he did not see any risk that came along with being a firefighter.
As regards whether the student knew what the work of firefighters entailed- all All students agreed that theyfirefighters are the people who are tasked with saving lives and properties in the event of a fire outbreak. [See how I’m trimming your sentences? You can do this editing throughout.] Introduce your figure. All students agreed that the profession is very important to the society.
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Discussion
From the results gathered it became clear to the researcher that many students thought firefighters earned very much contrary to the situation on ground because the Bureau of Labor Statistics showed that a firefighter earned an average of $47,720 per annum.
It is also evident from the results that students appreciated that appreciated the risks that firefighters exposed themselves to when doing rescue operations as well as the usefulness of the profession to the society. Indeed, the students also understood the job description of firefighters. Work on your wording. There are some needless repetitions. You need much more information here. When you report more on your results, you’ll have more to say here.
Conclusion
In conclusion, it is the researcher’s assertion that all the students did not give any disease that a firefighter can suffer as a result of his or her work and therefore it means that such information has not been publicized.[Did you report this in your Results section? That would be where you’d want this information.] Furthermore, most of the students thought that firefighters earned so much and therefore this means that the salaries of firefighters is less in comparison to the duties they undertake. So do students have an accurate understanding of firefighting?
Recommendations
The researcher is of the opinion that theThe following recommendations should be given effectwould improve students’ knowledge about the so as to improve the work of firefighters:
1. Revise their salaries upwards. Include recommendations that are specific and do-able. How and to what extent do we raise salaries.
2. Educate people about the dangers involved in the profession. How, when and to what extent?
3. Teach firefighters on how to navigate buildings they are unfamiliar with in the event of a fire accident. Keep your recommendations focused on what to do to educate the public about firefighters.
REFERENCES
Bliss, J.P., Tidwell, P.D. and Guest, M.A., 1997. The effectiveness of virtual reality for administering spatial navigation training to firefighters. Presence: Teleoperators and Virtual Environments, 6(1), pp.73-86.
Kern, D.G., Neill, M.A., Wrenn, D.S. and Varone, J.C., 1993. Investigation of a unique time space cluster of sarcoidosis in firefighters. American Review of Respiratory Disease, 148(4_pt_1), pp.974-980.
Newman, K. L., & Newman, L. S. (2012). Occupational causes of sarcoidosis. Current opinion in allergy and clinical immunology, 12(2), 145.
Torr, J.D., 2004. Responding to Attack: Firefighters and Police. Lucent Books
Wagner, D., Heinrichs, M. and Ehlert, U., 1998. Prevalence of symptoms of posttraumatic stress disorder in German professional firefighters. American Journal of Psychiatry, pp. 1727- 1732.
Appendix A
1. How much money do you think a firefighter earns in a year?
2. Do you know what the work of a firefighter entails? If yes, describe
3. Do you think firefighters are useful in the society?
4. Are you aware of any risks/diseases firefighters expose themselves to in discharging their duties? If yes, state them
knowldge on firefighters
Series 1 Salary Job Description Usefulness Risks/Diseases 6.0 10.0 10.0 4.5 Series 2 Salary Job Description Usefulness Risks/Diseases 3.0 0.0 0.0 1.0 Series 3 Salary Job Description Usefulness Risks/Diseases 1.0 0.0 0.0 0.0