Debra Beilke: I DO ENCOURAGE YOU TO FILL OUT THE 'READING YOUR POEM' WORKSHEET AND GET MY FEEDBACK BEFORE WRITING THE PAPER. THAT WAY, I WILL LET YOU KNOW IF YOU GO DOWN THE WRONG PATH. Jun 6, 2016 8:23:05 PM CDT
Debra Beilke: WOULD IT BE HELPFUL IF WE LOOKED MORE CLOSELY AT THE SAMPLE EXPLICATION, OR DOES THE ASSIGNMENT SEEM CLEAR? Jun 6, 2016 8:23:39 PM CDT
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Debra Beilke: WOULD IT BE HELPFUL IF WE LOOKED MORE CLOSELY AT THE SAMPLE EXPLICATION, OR DOES THE ASSIGNMENT SEEM CLEAR? Ju Jun 6, 2016 8:24:26 PM CDT
Debra Beilke: I REPEATED THAT FOR SADIYA, WHO WAS GONE WHEN I FIRST ASKED. Jun 6, 2016 8:24:39 PM CDT
Lindsey Johnson: i would find it helpful Jun 6, 2016 8:24:59 PM CDT
Jordan Guison: me, too Jun 6, 2016 8:25:38 PM CDT
Debra Beilke: OK. LET'S LOOK AT IT. I WILL REPRODUCE CERTAIN SECTIONS OF IT HERE. Jun 6, 2016 8:26:26 PM CDT
Sadiya Haille: i would find that helpful, because i'm having a hard time looking for literary techniques Jun 6, 2016 8:26:49 PM CDT
Debra Beilke: O“When Aunt is dead, her terrified hands will lie / Still ringed with ordeals she was mastered by. / The tigers in the panel that she made / Will go on prancing, proud and unafraid.” So ends the lush and very focused poem “Aunt Jennifer’s Tigers” by Adrienne Rich. Using the interlocking symbols of the tiger and the ring, the poet illuminates the tragedy of a woman who has lived the greater part of her life as the subordinate member in an unbalanced marriage. The highlighted sentence is the thesis. Notice it has both “what” [tragedy of a woman….marriage] and the ‘how” [using the interlocking symbols of the tiger and the ring} Jun 6, 2016 8:27:02 PM CDT
Sadiya Haille: on learning to love America poem Jun 6, 2016 8:27:05 PM CDT
Debra Beilke: HERE I HAVE REPRODUCED THE FIRST PARAGRAPH. Jun 6, 2016 8:27:55 PM CDT
Debra Beilke: THE THESIS IS THE SENTENCE BEGINNING 'USING THE INTERLOCKING SYMBOLS O FTHE TIGERS AND THE RING" Jun 6, 2016 8:28:17 PM CDT
Debra Beilke: THIS THESIS CONTAINS BOTH THE "WHAT" [THE THEME OF THE POEM] AND THE "HOW" [SOME OF ITS LITERARY TECHNIQUES. Jun 6, 2016 8:28:48 PM CDT
Debra Beilke: TELL ME WHAT THE THEME IS IN THIS THESIS STATEMENT. Jun 6, 2016 8:29:40 PM CDT
Sadiya Haille: thank you profressor Jun 6, 2016 8:29:54 PM CDT
Sadiya Haille: The poet interlocks the speakers past of dealing with whatever the reason why the speaker left her country wether is for better opputunity or civil war for a better life and dealing with the present and the culture shock and learning how to love this new country she emigrated too. She has to raise her American son who is ironically what she has to learn how to love. Like her past, her son future is also another pushing reason to adapt to America. Jun 6, 2016 8:30:25 PM CDT
Debra Beilke: I MAY NOT HAVE BEEN CLEAR. IN THE THESIS STATEMENT ABOUT "AUNT JENNIFER'S TIGERS," WHICH PART ARTICULATES THE THEME OF THE POEM? Jun 6, 2016 8:31:48 PM CDT
Lindsey Johnson: isnt the theme of the life of a women who is unhappy and escapes by making these tigers? Jun 6, 2016 8:32:06 PM CDT
Debra Beilke: SORT OF. MY QUESTION WAS SIMPLY TO REPEAT THE THEME STATEMENT IN THIS PARTICULAR PERSON'S EXPLICATION. THIS IS: he poet illuminates the tragedy of a woman who has lived the greater part of her life as the subordinate member in an unbalanced marriage Jun 6, 2016 8:33:06 PM CDT
Lindsey Johnson: oh that makes sense now Jun 6, 2016 8:33:45 PM CDT
Keri Johnson: * Jun 6, 2016 8:33:52 PM CDT
Debra Beilke: SOMEBODY ELSE MIGHT HAVE A DIFFERENT INTERPRETATION OF THE POEM, BUT I JUST WANT PEOPLE TO BE CLEAR ON WHAT "THEME" MEANS. SOMETIMES PEOPLE CONFUSE IT WITH "TOPIC" WHICH IS A MUCH BROADER, MORE GENERAL IDEA. Jun 6, 2016 8:33:53 PM CDT
Debra Beilke: THE PHRASE"THE "INTERLOCKING SYMBOLS OF THE TIGER AND THE RING" ARE THE PARTS OF THE THESIS THAT REFER TO THE LITERARY TECHNIQUES. Jun 6, 2016 8:34:44 PM CDT
Debra Beilke: SO THIS WRITER FOCUSED ON SYMBOLISM IN THE THESIS. Jun 6, 2016 8:34:59 PM CDT
Debra Beilke: BUT HE DID MENTION SOME OTHER TECHNIQUES IN THE PAPER ITSELF. Jun 6, 2016 8:35:10 PM CDT
Debra Beilke: ARE YOU WITH ME SO FAR? Jun 6, 2016 8:35:16 PM CDT
Jordan Guison: gotcha Jun 6, 2016 8:35:30 PM CDT
Keri Johnson: * Jun 6, 2016 8:35:31 PM CDT
Lindsey Johnson: so with the thesis we dont have to have all of the techniques in it? Jun 6, 2016 8:35:34 PM CDT
Sadiya Haille: * Jun 6, 2016 8:35:45 PM CDT
Debra Beilke: NO, JUST THE ONES YOU THINK ARE MOST IMPORTANT. Jun 6, 2016 8:35:47 PM CDT
Lindsey Johnson: ok Jun 6, 2016 8:35:52 PM CDT
Debra Beilke: OTHERWISE, IT COULD END UP AS A LIST OF 20 DIFFERENT POINTS. Jun 6, 2016 8:36:03 PM CDT
Debra Beilke: REGARDING THE ORGANIZATION OF AN EXPLICATION YOU HAVE SOME CHOICES. Jun 6, 2016 8:36:37 PM CDT
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Debra Beilke: ONE WAY IS TO GO THROUGH THE POEM LINE BY LINE AND COMMENT ON THE TECHNIQUES THAT WAY. Jun 6, 2016 8:36:52 PM CDT
Sadiya Haille: my internet is really slow Jun 6, 2016 8:36:59 PM CDT
Debra Beilke: ANOTHER WAY IS TO ORGANIZE THE POEM BY THE LITERARY TECHNIQUES YOU WISH TO FOCUS ON. Jun 6, 2016 8:37:09 PM CDT
Debra Beilke: IN THIS SAMPLE, THE WRITER ORGANIZED THE PARAGRAPHS BY THE SYMBOLS HE IS FOCUSING ON: THE RING AND THE TIGERS AND WHAT THE TIGERS REPRESENT. Jun 6, 2016 8:37:54 PM CDT
Debra Beilke: YOU CAN DO IT EITHER WAY. Jun 6, 2016 8:37:58 PM CDT
Debra Beilke: HOWEVER, I WOULD RECOMMEND ORGANIZING IT BY LITERARY TECHNIQUE. OTHERWISE, IT IS TOO EASY TO REVERT TO PARAPHRASE. "THIS LINE MEANS X AND THIS LINE MEANS Y AND THIS LINE MEANS Z." YOU DON'T WANT TO DO THAT. Jun 6, 2016 8:38:50 PM CDT
Debra Beilke: MAKE SURE THAT YOU NOT ONLY MAKE YOUR GENERAL POINT ABOUT THE LITERARY TECHNIQUE, BUT THAT YOU ALSO SUPPORT YOUR POINTS BY GIVING EVIDENCE (QUOTTAIONS) AND THEN ANALYZING THAT EVIDENCE. Jun 6, 2016 8:39:28 PM CDT
Debra Beilke: WHEN YOU DISCUSS POETRY, RATHER THAN CITING PAGE NUMBERS, YOU SHOULD CITE LINE NUMBERS. Jun 6, 2016 8:39:43 PM CDT
Debra Beilke: YOU INDICATE LINE BREAKS WITH A / Jun 6, 2016 8:39:55 PM CDT
Debra Beilke: FOR EXAMPLE, I WOULD WRITE "ROSES ARE RED / VIOLETS ARE BLUE / SUGAR IS SWEET / AND SO ARE YOU" (1-4). Jun 6, 2016 8:40:28 PM CDT
Debra Beilke: MAKE SENSE? Jun 6, 2016 8:40:56 PM CDT
Jordan Guison: oh, ok Jun 6, 2016 8:40:57 PM CDT
Lindsey Johnson: * Jun 6, 2016 8:41:00 PM CDT
Sadiya Haille: * Jun 6, 2016 8:41:08 PM CDT
Keri Johnson: * Jun 6, 2016 8:41:21 PM CDT
Debra Beilke: OK. WE ARE RUNNING OUT OF TIME. Jun 6, 2016 8:41:44 PM CDT
Debra Beilke: WHAT OTHER QUESTIONS OR CONCERNS DO YOU HAVE? Jun 6, 2016 8:41:50 PM CDT
Lindsey Johnson: do all poems have a stanza? Jun 6, 2016 8:42:15 PM CDT
Debra Beilke: ALL POEMS HAVE AT LEAST ONE STANZA. STANZA REFERS TO THE LINES THAT ARE ALL GROUPED TOGETHER. THE EQUIVALENT (SORT OF) IN PROSE IS THE PARAGRAPH. Jun 6, 2016 8:43:22 PM CDT
Debra Beilke: _____________ Jun 6, 2016 8:43:24 PM CDT
Debra Beilke: SHOOT. I WAS GOING TO OUTLINE A POEM, BUT IT WON'T LET ME, IF A POEM HAS EIGHT LINES, BUT TEHRE IS AN EXTRA SPACE AFTER THE FOURTH LINE, THAT MEANS IT HAS TWO STANZAS. Jun 6, 2016 8:43:57 PM CDT
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Debra Beilke: OTHER QUESTIONS? Jun 6, 2016 8:44:23 PM CDT
Sadiya Haille: how do you look for symbols? Jun 6, 2016 8:45:00 PM CDT
Sadiya Haille: in a poem Jun 6, 2016 8:45:07 PM CDT
Debra Beilke: A SYMBOL IS SOMETHING THAT EXISTS LITERALLY IN THE POEM, BUT ALSO TAKES ON LARGER SIGNIICANCE. WE USE THEM IN EVERYDAY LIFE AS WELL. Jun 6, 2016 8:45:42 PM CDT
Debra Beilke: FOR EXAMPLE, THE WEDDING RING IS A SYMBOL. LITERALLY, IT IS JUST A CIRCLE OF GOLD OR SILVER. Jun 6, 2016 8:46:00 PM CDT
Jordan Guison: like the bald eagle. symbold of freedom. Jun 6, 2016 8:46:11 PM CDT
Debra Beilke: BUT IT ALSO CARRIES LARGER SIGNIICANCE OF UNDYING LOVE. Jun 6, 2016 8:46:16 PM CDT
Debra Beilke: RIGHT, JORDAN. THE AMERICAN FLAG IS ALSO A SYMBOL. Jun 6, 2016 8:46:24 PM CDT
Sadiya Haille: ok got it but my poem is hard to find the symbol or techinciques Jun 6, 2016 8:46:52 PM CDT
Debra Beilke: SO IN THE POEM "AUNT jENNIFER'S TIGERS,' YOU'LL NOTICE IT IS QUITE SHORT. AND YET THE POET DEVOTES QUITE A BIT OF ATTENTION TO AUNT JENNIFER'S WEDDING RING. Jun 6, 2016 8:47:04 PM CDT
Debra Beilke: NORMALLY, ONE PROBABLY WOULDN'T FOCUS SO MUCH ON THE WEDDING RING UNLESS IT REPRESENTS SOMETHING LARGER. THAT'S WHEN YOU HAVE TO ASK YOURSELF, WHY? WHAT ELSE MIGHT IT MEAN? Jun 6, 2016 8:47:38 PM CDT
Debra Beilke: SADIYA--NOT ALL POEMS HAVE SYMBOLS, SO YOURS MAY NOT. Jun 6, 2016 8:47:48 PM CDT
Debra Beilke: YOU CAN LOOK AT THINGS LIKE THE FORM OF THE POEM, THE TYPE OF LANGUAGE SHE USES (FORMAL, INFORMAL, SLANG, ETC.), LINE LENGTH, NUMBER OF STANZAS, EVEN PUNCTUATION. T HOSE ARE ALL LITERARY TECHNIQUES AS WELL. Jun 6, 2016 8:48:28 PM CDT
Debra Beilke: DOES THAT MAKE SENSE? Jun 6, 2016 8:48:50 PM CDT
Lindsey Johnson: * Jun 6, 2016 8:49:14 PM CDT
Keri Johnson: * Jun 6, 2016 8:49:21 PM CDT
Jordan Guison: * Jun 6, 2016 8:49:22 PM CDT
Sadiya Haille: * Jun 6, 2016 8:49:27 PM CDT
Debra Beilke: FOR EXAMPLE, IF I WROTE TO A STUDENT, "THOU ART A LOVELY LASS WHOSE MIND IS LIKE A BOUNTIFUL SPRING" Jun 6, 2016 8:49:40 PM CDT
Debra Beilke: THE USE OF LANGUAGE IS QUITE DIFFERENT THAN IF I WROTE: "YO--BRO--YOU ARE ONE SMART BAD ASS SISTER." Jun 6, 2016 8:50:26 PM CDT
Sadiya Haille: I have to break my fast profressor, it's sundown Jun 6, 2016 8:50:28 PM CDT
Debra Beilke: OK, SADIYA. Jun 6, 2016 8:50:33 PM CDT
Debra Beilke: MAKE SENSE? Jun 6, 2016 8:50:36 PM CDT
Sadiya Haille: yes profressor Jun 6, 2016 8:50:45 PM CDT
Lindsey Johnson: * Jun 6, 2016 8:50:50 PM CDT
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Debra Beilke: ANY OTHER QUESTIONS? Jun 6, 2016 8:51:08 PM CDT
Debra Beilke: IF YOU HAVE QUESTIONS/CONCERNS ABOUT THE PARTICULAR POEM YOU ARE EXPLICATING, FEEL FREE TO E-MAIL ME. Jun 6, 2016 8:51:24 PM CDT
Lindsey Johnson: this was very helpful Jun 6, 2016 8:51:38 PM CDT
Debra Beilke: GOOD. Jun 6, 2016 8:51:45 PM CDT
Jordan Guison: yes, thank you professor. Jun 6, 2016 8:51:59 PM CDT
Debra Beilke: IF NO MORE QUESTIONS, THEN YOU ARE FREE TO LEAVE! Jun 6, 2016 8:52:25 PM CDT
Debra Beilke: GOOD NIGHT. Jun 6, 2016 8:52:27 PM CDT
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Lindsey Johnson: goog night Jun 6, 2016 8:52:34 PM CDT
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