Bus 642 Business Research Methods & Tools Research Project

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When using the same citations after its first use (Eriksson, 2009) just include the published year (2009) until the citation changes. This adds to the academic validity of the paper showing the use of multiple research sources rather than relying on a repetitive single source.

Considering the amount of papers published on this subject, it shouldn't be very difficult to find an additional 2-3 unique academic sources that support your statements.

(1.76 / 2) Provides Background Information About the Research Project

Proficient - Provides background information about the Research Project. Minor details are missing.

(1.76 / 2) Describes the Management Dilemma

Proficient - Describes the management dilemma. The description is slightly underdeveloped.

(1.76 / 2) Develops a Research Question and Hypothesis

Proficient - Develops an accurate research question and hypothesis. The research question or hypothesis is slightly underdeveloped.

(0.88 / 1) Provides a Summary of Previously Conducted Scholarly Research on Similar Topics

Proficient - Provides a summary of previously conducted scholarly research on similar topics. The summary is slightly underdeveloped.

(0.09 / 0.1) Critical Thinking: Evidence

Proficient - Employs applicable information from credible sources to develop an analysis of the topic.

(0.18 / 0.2) Critical Thinking: Explanation of Issues

Proficient - Clearly explains the issue to be considered, delivering enough relevant information for an adequate understanding.

(0.18 / 0.2) Written Communication: Control of Syntax and Mechanics

Proficient - Displays comprehension and organization of syntax and mechanics, such as spelling and grammar. Written work contains only a few minor errors and is mostly easy to understand.

(0.15 / 0.2) Written Communication: APA Formatting

Basic - Exhibits limited knowledge of APA formatting throughout the paper. However, layout does not meet all APA requirements.

(0.09 / 0.1) Written Communication: Page Requirement

Proficient - The length of the paper is nearly equivalent to the required number of correctly formatted pages.

(0.18 / 0.2) Written Communication: Resource Requirement

Proficient - Uses the required number of scholarly sources to support ideas. All sources on the reference page are used and cited correctly within the body of the assignment.

Overall Score: 7.03 / 8