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· While editing and proofreading (correcting mistakes) is critical to receiving a good grade, first you should review the organization and content of your paper. 

 

A mechanically perfect paper that makes poor arguments will get a worse grade than a well-argued paper with a few mistakes. (80% content & development, 20% mechanics) . 

 

What changes are you making in your papers as you revise to create a polished draft this week?