I want someone to write a Summary Feedback and Revision of my essay

Feedback and Revision

Your brief 1-2 page summary of your essay and revision:

· Summary of the feedback you received from me, your instructor, on your 2nd draft and during conferences and of how you used the feedback in the revision

· Summary of how your essay has been changed from 1st draft to 2nd to the final draft.

The structure of the paper:

1st Paragraph: Summarize how your essay has been changed from 1st draft to 2nd to the final

draft.

2nd Paragraph: Summarize the feedback you received from me. Refer to me by professor Kim

And then she…

3rd/4th Paragraph(s): State how you used the feedback to improve your paper.